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W. H. 新詩集
ISSUE #227
Author: W.H.
W. H. 新詩集
Author: W.H.
ISSUE #227
萬碼奔馳 (Penana 創作挑戰「馬/碼/螞/媽⋯⋯的多重宇宙」參賽作品#1)
No Plagiarism!S2k8gOZpLKbFLU8POZ6Pposted on PＥNAＮＡ

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〈萬碼奔馳〉

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不，為何您拒收我詩

要我回去再爬文磨礪

嫌太直太白沒有上漆

髹一髹，或許更精緻

改一改，才有詩樣子

麻的，我已經很燒腦

煩請告訴我哪裡不好

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有分行不代表就是詩

的確詩大多分裂生殖

與其說詩的長相如此

詩分行實則因著暗示

不然把散文拆成詩體

相信一堆詩一坨贅字

關於這事看習作便知

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若果形式有節奏音韻

是詩的外貌庶幾近之

想想歌詞也是，但詩

融合意象譬喻在修辭

思考如何駕萬碼奔馳

更上層樓是物我相映

詩的要領係轉換虛實

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還好詩也有遊戲性質

得來全不費九位繆斯

不管國文老師怎麼說

時間一到我就要發作

來寫怪詩最是有意思

修改上癮捨不得歇止

繕理完畢土虱變海獅

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【作品宣傳】

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1.《W.H. 新詩集》

https://www.penana.com/story/120970

2.《W.H. 短漫集》

https://www.penana.com/story/121206

3.《考律師這件事及其他》

https://www.penana.com/story/133193

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附圖原畫作者是 Angelo Jank (1868-1940)。作者去世70年以上，其著作財產權已經消滅，原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain)，任何人均可使用。

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【創挑出處】

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