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該敘述就敘述,該演就演,8964 copyright protection216PENANAnwfgXWoYzv 維尼
對白流暢,場景敘述完整。8964 copyright protection216PENANAeelUnzpZ5b 維尼
文筆程度R上SR,加上有圖片輔助👍,8964 copyright protection216PENANAnsXxPRvcj9 維尼
造理說是個可以SSR的作品。8964 copyright protection216PENANAUPEFg2vxJU 維尼
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不過我有一個最大的疑問8964 copyright protection216PENANAq2UKJIRh6t 維尼
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故事什麼時候才會開始呢🧐🧐8964 copyright protection216PENANAP50rPUcxzp 維尼
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前面比較像在看背景設定集、角色相處的一些小傳。8964 copyright protection216PENANAf0o6YUN6yh 維尼
到#8才有另一個女角(疑似情敵),有衝突才有那麼一咪的終於故事終於要開始了的感覺。8964 copyright protection216PENANAjQSC98BTVg 維尼
到#10背下來的有:8964 copyright protection216PENANAfI992wW8qs 維尼
世界有龍族、有魔法、晨曦之劍/槍,其中一個是女主角。8964 copyright protection216PENANARgVV60ZlS4 維尼
好像有貴族VS貴族,晚上不能關燈不然就會死(?),有邪惡的非人類種族。8964 copyright protection216PENANAn9i67mrrw2 維尼
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就⋯⋯故事還沒開始,先被作者上了一課的感覺。8964 copyright protection216PENANAxkewU4uHH9 維尼
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要看的懂我的故事,請先把這些資訊背下來哦😘8964 copyright protection216PENANAI6HmysASyZ 維尼
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我🥹🥹🥹8964 copyright protection216PENANAxJGlZPAC6I 維尼
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或許是劇情走慢熱路線,我試著用另一種看故事的方法。8964 copyright protection216PENANAHzKYRuljM3 維尼
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那就是喜歡角色~8964 copyright protection216PENANAptlOeoxIXI 維尼
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女主角:漂亮學霸,雖然有談戀愛就傻傻的屬性,但還是離我太遠了,先不要。8964 copyright protection216PENANAbLdCXBcn6o 維尼
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庫雷因(老實說我搞錯以為他是男主角):8964 copyright protection216PENANAwJWIstGPPm 維尼
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雖然現在油膩油膩的,但純情的女主角一定能感化他,8964 copyright protection216PENANAh1jGxfCclI 維尼
讓他浪子回頭吧!等等、感覺他要黑化了,那還是先不要好了。8964 copyright protection216PENANAD364NpxcCb 維尼
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女主導師:龍族,總之也是個超強強者,一樣離我太遠,先不要。8964 copyright protection216PENANATFa5zb0grv 維尼
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男主角:誰?8964 copyright protection216PENANAT9yd8EoBJA 維尼
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情敵:剛出場沒什麼感覺8964 copyright protection216PENANA6eSYzL1kQC 維尼
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身為讀者的我,不知從何下手,劇情(目前)吸引不瞭、角色(目前)還喜歡不上,8964 copyright protection216PENANA7ORR0tBSoB 維尼
沒有很大的動力繼續閱讀下去。8964 copyright protection216PENANAGxg1FvuQNo 維尼
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當然這只是我的個人感想,如一開始所述林檎大大是個實力派作者,8964 copyright protection216PENANAVBsXEejFzV 維尼
也或許我本身就不屬於林檎大大的"目標讀者",以上心得就~看看就好。8964 copyright protection216PENANABYuosVzjSW 維尼
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最後祝福林檎大大寫作順利。8964 copyright protection216PENANAYcdMxdKjrw 維尼
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