創作挑戰是 以一個創作者前輩的身份(姿態)來教導其他人怎麼寫1013Please respect copyright.PENANAhUtn8MgT30
為了一點分數...只好開啟我的唬爛模式了1013Please respect copyright.PENANAbXNrMcorAi
畢竟我也只是一個新手 還沒什麼人看 而且還斷更的那種1013Please respect copyright.PENANAbFiW0bx43W
所以如標題那樣 我就是一個身材還不錯的臭皮匠(喂~1013Please respect copyright.PENANAyjV9rgi8A8
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題目 : 戴上諸葛面具的臭皮匠 (這樣應該可以吧)1013Please respect copyright.PENANAlWy6xXDvKf
類型 : 小說與散文新詩1013Please respect copyright.PENANAzEAnX1CjgO
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咳咳 ! 那徒兒,就聽諸葛師傅來替你指點迷津八1013Please respect copyright.PENANADUekTAhf7I
首先呢,你先得有一股熱忱,你喜歡吃包子嗎?想想你必須跑完4000公尺後還得吃得下包子,這樣的決心與熱情才可以,每天下班都累得要死了,就算不累也賭爛得要死了,還得要寫下你的小說紀錄下來,這可是件不容易的事啊1013Please respect copyright.PENANAQNXEav90qG
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甚麼?你想問我有了熱情之後?1013Please respect copyright.PENANAZAtdtPyPCr
有了熱情之後你必須得要學會想像,讓故事情節通順,你的故事必須要有主角、配角、反派、一般人物、生旦淨末丑我想你也聽過一點,故事中有男女主角,更要有能夠襯托主角的配角,記住阿!我說的配角,不是什麼多厲害的角色,而是襯托主角的角色,這一點很重要阿,接著呢就是反派...反派有的黑有的白有的藏在主角群裡當臥底,最後來個回馬槍般的背叛,還得要有點綴環境的丑角,緩和氣氛與平舖日常,那就是小說的丑角,這樣大致懂了吧1013Please respect copyright.PENANA5VP1bmGOOF
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你啊!我才剛說完大綱你就急著問寫作技巧了,真是的...1013Please respect copyright.PENANAWsmdx8E1z3
好吧,那為師就教教你,有的人呢~習慣闡述+動作,有的人呢習慣寫動作+旁白,有的人則是只喜歡寫動作,每個人的寫法都不太一樣,都各有千秋...,瞧你一副傻氣的樣子,沒聽懂吧,這樣吧...為師舉個例子 : 諸葛孔明看見山間雲霧飄渺心知這一切都是周瑜的陰謀 立馬起身號令三軍 起身說道 ""來人阿 備妥三千兵馬各從東西兩側進攻"",以上呢就是闡述+動作,記得阿!空格的地方你要自己填上標點符號,你也可以選擇那些要併成同一句。1013Please respect copyright.PENANAkCF8CdzqR8
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那我接著說啦,: 諸葛孔明眼看情況不對,心頭有股絲毫地不安,微微抬頭看向天空,眼神中透漏著,滿是過去與周瑜不愉快的事,連忙起身說道""來人阿,備妥三千兵馬向東西方策進攻,千萬別讓江東得逞'''此時的孔明望向軍台上的硯墨,心中似乎還在盤算著什麼。徒兒,這樣....你有沒有了解更多了阿?埃阿,那為師要繼續講第三種囉,接著聽阿,孔明察見天有異象,便卜了一掛,看來是周瑜那裏已經有了動靜,為了取得先機必須得下命令,孔明手舉起羽扇另一手則悠閒的撫過自己的鬍鬚,緩和且平穩地口吻說道""來人阿,備妥三千兵馬,向那東西側進攻''''說完便和氣的看向軍中的沙盤,娓娓說道''周瑜阿,周瑜...你的對手,可是我孔明''。這樣...徒兒,你懂了些了吧?1013Please respect copyright.PENANAEqM6rfeqrJ
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哈哈哈哈哈哈,你瞧瞧你的樣子,沒關係,反正為師我用這方法,左葬這本書還是沒人看,所以阿!你就放寬心吧,啊?你想寫散文跟新詩?你不想寫小說啦?1013Please respect copyright.PENANANsYSH0wiwj
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好吧!那為師就教教你新詩散文1013Please respect copyright.PENANAzjhHERUQk8
第一呢你必須先看看其他作者寫的詩,看多一點但不用太多,看到你有一種「這些新詩怎麼都長得一樣」這樣你就先學會入門了,之後呢...就是多出去走走之後多多觀察周邊的事物,最後才是看一些詞藻語詞彙,哈哈,你啊,你肯定是想寫那種全部都用艱澀難懂,又很美的詞彙來寫,以為那種才是散文吧?1013Please respect copyright.PENANAIf41rUNdDm
不是的,要我說的話...至從余光中那個年代以後,嚴格且華美又難懂的詞藻,已經不被新詩與散文接受了,反倒是你故事的內容,那才是真的本事,那才是真的對人生事物的看法與見解。1013Please respect copyright.PENANAyjtTG0Wbvz
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怎麼?還有想問的嗎?沒有了?1013Please respect copyright.PENANAs8gZM2mN7f
阿?你說要怎麼寫才會有人看?1013Please respect copyright.PENANAtYiSX7ul7O
我可是臭...臭美的諸葛亮,又不是姜子牙,像那種願者上鉤的讀者,不會發生在我身上,我啊~~我只是一個...默默寫故事,等待一陣東風的人1013Please respect copyright.PENANAkwoXP6F6JR
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就這樣!~ 祝大家新年快樂 ~ ya~
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戴上諸葛面具的臭皮匠
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