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ISSUE #1
Author: 青青河上草
Published:
Nov 23, 2022
推文
Author: 青青河上草
Published:
Nov 23, 2022
ISSUE #1
同人[黑籃] QRS大大
No Plagiarism!5wHzYPmT1E1UtSwMw27yposted on PＥNAＮＡ

[黑籃] 黃瀨BG 大女子主義者 (甜文、穿越、同人、未完結)225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUOITyQLmUI

很可愛的一篇同人文，但因為本人未看過黑子籃球的動畫，所以針對角色有無OCC，給不出太直觀的看法。

QRS大大的這篇文很甜很可愛，沒有看過黑子籃球的可以安心入坑。

這篇文章有了穿越的戲碼有蠻戳中本草的點，喜歡穿越元素的大大們也可以來看看喔。

女主角很帥氣，讓我看完想幫他建立粉絲後援會了！(誇張)225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiPoGnGCTZz

男主角很可愛，有種奶萌奶萌的感覺，只想將它抓回家。

偷偷來點小建議，有些地方文章敘述沒有很連貫，有點會跟前面小小連結不起來。225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlnORk0DWvI

還有波浪號在書寫小說及文章中貌似比較少使用，但這說法很多，歡迎有想法的大大可以一起討論。

最後期待QRS大大後續更新！加油！

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