【魚魚創挑第三期】在冬季，談場文字戀愛吧 - 冬雪下的將軍(新詩)

※偶然看見寂魚路過家裡給在下的關注，回訪之餘，在下也藉由寂魚示範的作品給啟發的仿作來個東施效顰一下，也算是作為給寂魚辦的這個活動暖暖場子一用!

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題目:冬雪下的將軍(仿作)

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創作類型:新詩

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夜下的月正圓將軍停下了馬和遠望野林的那一邊

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血悄悄流淌在了傷口與戰甲的隙縫間

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將軍若有所思地回想著回想著亡妻美麗的容顏

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而又將軍摸向了脖子上的半截殘箭

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呼吸輕喘嘴角已沾上了風雪的森寒

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多次張眼望穿卻已是滿目雪白的茫然

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將軍不自主地唸起了亡妻鍾愛的詩篇

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不斷反覆在那半懵半醒中的呢喃

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「寒更傳曉箭，清鏡覽衰顏。

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隔牖風驚竹，開門雪滿山。

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灑空深巷靜，積素廣庭閒。

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借問袁安舍，翛然尚閉關。」

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待一切呢喃聲的終歸寂然只見在那黎明破曉的瞬間

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