I was walking home when all the sudden I heard my little brother yelling my name "CHARLIE" I look back to see him crying I start to run right to him just as my freind Lura stops me Lura:"Hey calm down he must have fell on his knees look*pionts to his bloody knees*" I stop"ok. . . ." he run and huged me shaking and screaming I just stood there looking at him like I had no control of my body I get back to reality and hug him "hey what happened Luka!?" he didnt speek for about 20 minetes Luka" I- saw a man with red skin but he's not the devil he's more then that. . ." Me and Luna just look at each over. "What- What do you mean hes more then the devil. . ." I start shaking there have been devils around the state of cannda but never in Japan. . . . Luka:'He- at the house charlie and mama she's-" i look at him begging that mama's fine and hopping he was just joking like a brother does but all I saw was a scared little boy crying over his sister asking her for comfort. . ."I-" I look down and start to breath heavily he starts to turn black and fades away like he was just air then all of the sudden I was alone like no one was real I look around yelling "HELLO IS ANYONE THERE!?" but all I saw was black pitch black. . . then I hear my brother screaming I run towerds the screams just to see him get eattin by a red man that looks like the Akuma. . . . .he looks at me just as I start to move back towrds the pitch black place in Jigoku he starts to chase me as I see the way to Tengoku I start screaming "HELP ME PLS!" then an Tenchi closed the portel I fall on my knees crying just crying as the Akuma stops and stares at me holdding my brothers arms then the pitch black screen disipers as I wake up on the streets alone as an officer picks me up and takes me to an Oya no inai kodomo-tachi no tame no basho I look at him he was amarican for sure but why was he here? "umm mister why are you here?" he said nothing as he takes me to the Byoin I look at my face in a mirror that was in the Byoin all I can see was that I had cuts on my face and body then I relised this wasent a place for parentless kids it was an Bomei I was put on the bed and takin care of a few days later I was givin Kusuri I was in there for four months and five years for the blame of my brothers murder I can tell them that it was the Akuma but they keep saying that there not real because in a Byoin they can't tell you anything that is happening in the outside world (ask if you would like a part two)103Please respect copyright.PENANAtNq8R2tDbY
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Make Me a Horror Movie!
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(Made a five hour movie called) Is It The End. . . .Of . . .
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