There have been so many great entries, it was hard to pick winners. So, before I list the winners, I want to give a more detailed review of each writers work. If you don't feel like reading it, feel free to skip to the end, where I will list the winners.527Please respect copyright.PENANA0tvJ0E2hzu
RAMENNOODLESX: Well done, I really enjoyed reading this, there was plenty of details and lots of emotion and dialogue involved. It was a bit of a read, but well work it, right down to the end. I loved how you made it so that James was unable to touch anything tangible. Your portrayed your characters relationships well. Great Job.527Please respect copyright.PENANApjEik74hPz
NAKYSHA: Well done, your approach and description of the afterlife in the beginning was interesting, and I like how you ended the story, with Jeff being able to watch his family, talk to his grandson and later be rejoined by his wife. Very touching, great job.527Please respect copyright.PENANA4H4rGSxjeI
ElIZABETHBECKER: Well done, short but simple, and sometimes that is all that is needed. I like how Alexander decided not to use his 10 minutes,and it made sense for him to do so, in a way. Great job527Please respect copyright.PENANACyKdXD4xjY
BUBUWINTER:Well done, the way you took into perspective the halves was interesting, and caught my attention from early on. I love how he choose to say nothing at all, instead just giving her a push on the swing. The way that he died for his sister was very touching indeed. Great Job527Please respect copyright.PENANAm43kUuIQ6i
SAR-LOW:Well done. Sometimes less is more, very touching story. Paints a nice simple image, while leaving room for imagination, great job527Please respect copyright.PENANAyZvsJrG3uH
CORRUPTEDPURITY:Well done. I liked your approach of having the character look over and run through the available options. While a different approach than the other stories in the contest, i found it interesting that the character had not made a difference in anyone's life, which may have been better. Good descriptions, well done.527Please respect copyright.PENANANGqsEmE1nE
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Picking winners was hard. I took into consideration plot, grammar, spelling errors, and a few other basic things. Thank you for participating. 527Please respect copyright.PENANAA0NYL8u9wN
The Winners are:527Please respect copyright.PENANA8pZpANHn4H
First place:BUBUWINTER527Please respect copyright.PENANAM8qytA0kpR
Second Place:RAMENNOODLESX527Please respect copyright.PENANAZm99FyednY
Third place:NAKYSHA527Please respect copyright.PENANAcj0TW2zR1O
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