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龍叔散文集
ISSUE #86
Author: 龍叔
龍叔散文集
Author: 龍叔
ISSUE #86
司機(劇本Version.2)
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S:1

時：晚

外景 的士外圍

失婚啊晴，三十歲。

的士司機啊武，三十歲。

ᇫ啊武將的士泊喺某間酒店出面，開住車窗食煙、撳電話。

ᇫ著住婚紗嘅啊晴喊住咁衝上的士。

ᇫ啊武見到之後就即刻彈走煙頭。

啊晴：我想返屋企。

啊武：我點知你住邊啊小姐？

啊晴：Sorry。

ᇫ啊武收埋電話，望向倒後鏡見到係啊晴。

啊武：你…冇搬屋啊嘛？

ᇫ啊晴望向倒後鏡。

ᇫ兩人在倒後鏡裡對視。

ᇫ啊晴抺咗抺眼淚。

ᇫ啊晴擰咗擰頭。

ᇫ啊武戴上安全帶。

啊武：咁我開車喇。

S:2

時：晚

內景 的士車廂內

ᇫ啊武時不時就望一眼倒後鏡，欲言又止。

ᇫ啊晴挨住車窗。

ᇫ眼角默默咁流下一滴眼淚。

ᇫ啊武放慢車速。

ᇫ左手從中間儲物位拎出幾張紙巾。

啊武：抺一抺啲眼淚啦。

ᇫ啊晴接過紙巾。

ᇫ啊晴優雅咁抺走眼淚。

啊晴：估唔到識你嗰陣你揸緊車，而家你都仲揸緊車。

ᇫ啊武透過倒後鏡望住啊晴。

ᇫ啊武苦笑一聲。

啊武：咁咪即係冇進步過囉。

ᇫ啊晴微笑。

ᇫ啊晴坐返直個人。

啊晴：咁又點，你都係咁貼心。

ᇫ啊武嘆氣。

ᇫ啊武閂返埋個儲物位。

啊武：有鬼用咩，想搵多幾個銀仔都冇。

ᇫ啊晴嘆氣。

啊晴：如果一早嫁比你咪幾好。

ᇫ啊武苦笑。

啊武：話唔定你一早嫁比我，而家乞緊食呢。

ᇫ兩人喺倒後鏡對視。

ᇫ兩人「噗」一聲咁一齊笑咗出嚟。

啊晴：至少你唔會出軌。

ᇫ啊武聽到之後即刻收起笑容，加快車速。

S:3

時：晚

內景 的士車廂內

ᇫ特寫倒後鏡。

ᇫ的士到達啊晴屋企樓下。

ᇫ啊武撳停個錶。

ᇫ錶價錢顯示四百二十。

啊武：齊頭四百得喇。

ᇫ啊晴拎咗張五百蚊出嚟。

啊晴：唔洗找喇。

ᇫ啊武推開佢張五百蚊。

啊武：唔洗喇。

ᇫ啊晴將錢塞落佢到。

啊晴：淨低下次嘅。

ᇫ啊武O曬嘴。

啊武：我哋仲有下次，仲可以返到以前咁咩？

ᇫ啊晴打開車門，抱起婚紗準備落車。

啊晴：你係司機嚟架嘛。

ᇫ啊晴講完苦笑咗聲就落咗車，得返啊武望住前面苦笑。

啊武：差啲唔記得咗。

ᇫ啊武苦笑。

ᇫ啊武扁嘴。

ᇫ啊武趴喺呔盤上面喊。

S:4

時：晚

內景 啊晴屋企窗台

ᇫ啊晴望住窗外嘅夜景。

啊晴：我想嫁比你，但你仲返唔返到去以前咁？

ᇫ啊晴抬頭望向天空。

S:5

時：晚

內景 啊武屋企後樓梯

ᇫ啊武擔住煙，望住窗外嘅夜景。

啊武：我想娶你，但你仲返唔返到去以前咁？

ᇫ啊武抬頭望向天空。

S:6

時：晚

外景 天

同一個天，但又唔係同一個天。

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龍叔散文集
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Last updated: Jul 17, 2024
Total word count: 25,331
Total reading time: 84 Minutes
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