Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.133Please respect copyright.PENANAylk037cenb
As I did with my previous contest, I’m going to be adding comments to each submission.133Please respect copyright.PENANAXXrInkldIZ
Grammar: 5 points133Please respect copyright.PENANALUSacNC0Uu
Creativity: 10 points133Please respect copyright.PENANAnuMMJfrvGO
Emotion: 5 points133Please respect copyright.PENANARxxCHUS1JK
Complying with the rules: 5 points
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#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi133Please respect copyright.PENANADc6H1Q2mBs
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!133Please respect copyright.PENANALYd6r0YoiC
Total: 20.5 pts
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#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame133Please respect copyright.PENANAFokwzElDId
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!133Please respect copyright.PENANAPzYSfC8jjX
Total: 19 pts
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#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor133Please respect copyright.PENANAzz4qMqwPsh
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!133Please respect copyright.PENANAbGwYnrjJ80
Total: 23.5 pts
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#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0133Please respect copyright.PENANAC0q5oZKp1k
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 133Please respect copyright.PENANAPm5tJh7Zx1
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!133Please respect copyright.PENANAEXfBxFjXri
Total: 20 pts
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#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers133Please respect copyright.PENANAgKL9sEJEF8
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!133Please respect copyright.PENANAR4XXpsIlgt
Total: 21 pts133Please respect copyright.PENANA4uj1KrMPbF
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Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)133Please respect copyright.PENANAkNvD6B0oGT
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 133Please respect copyright.PENANANgbOwwZYlW
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
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Never stop writing,
Julia133Please respect copyright.PENANAsRq5SzktNO
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