Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.307Please respect copyright.PENANAMMW1399WiL
As I did with my previous contest, I’m going to be adding comments to each submission.307Please respect copyright.PENANAmZ7P86MiXA
Grammar: 5 points307Please respect copyright.PENANADs5z2Ok7Fq
Creativity: 10 points307Please respect copyright.PENANA9EKcEfksZx
Emotion: 5 points307Please respect copyright.PENANAJL6HJrM9OT
Complying with the rules: 5 points
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#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi307Please respect copyright.PENANAojLFNQbaN6
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!307Please respect copyright.PENANA0AOf7z82bj
Total: 20.5 pts
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#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame307Please respect copyright.PENANAVaG1v9TeZf
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!307Please respect copyright.PENANAXkTSEIPPJF
Total: 19 pts
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#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor307Please respect copyright.PENANATboVwLQkjv
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!307Please respect copyright.PENANAAuZlUylP6v
Total: 23.5 pts
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#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0307Please respect copyright.PENANAQY0bs65wYu
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 307Please respect copyright.PENANAk3clUzvF0D
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!307Please respect copyright.PENANAoKWsa6u7Zd
Total: 20 pts
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#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers307Please respect copyright.PENANA28Dr4qXKcI
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!307Please respect copyright.PENANAD0qatJGb2i
Total: 21 pts307Please respect copyright.PENANAOvwRsfI5am
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Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)307Please respect copyright.PENANADiQd1nM6k2
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 307Please respect copyright.PENANAotvnpDNIz5
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
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Never stop writing,
Julia307Please respect copyright.PENANAP7GWGOFxsg
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