Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ83hN3xsgg4
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Grammar: 5 points386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcOrQCDWxg6
Creativity: 10 points386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP56sZVHpqZ
Emotion: 5 points386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoYQ3ApibBC
Complying with the rules: 5 points
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#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡurTuj0LJc7
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnmAtqMAIYK
Total: 20.5 pts
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#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnpA3bd133G
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4BTXwfnFFL
Total: 19 pts
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#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaBz7u4srZ5
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8cvYUE7ztH
Total: 23.5 pts
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#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJgyEzLD1Ov
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnN9z2pnkLz
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw6mD5GUPYu
Total: 20 pts
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#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoM1Cj37ulC
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzBVtwVuqjC
Total: 21 pts386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVo8EDE0Ie7
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Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgD1XoEZ1wv
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 386Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQWNxgIhlp2
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
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Never stop writing,
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