昨夜紅樓，
以書作枕夢見了賈寶玉的夢...
在秦可卿的溫暖的床上，
驚聽金釧兒的落井悲歌，
跟寶釵的金玉姻緣，
和黛玉的木石前盟，
還有襲人的第一次，
以及晴雯最後的結局！
寶玉的逗號
有緣點落在你我之間
欲言又止的省略號
斷續往還的分號
無數問號在海上飄浮
跟如流星雨點驚嘆號
「你我」二人的所願
卻始終有長長的間隔號連成銀河橫臥在其間
來一個圓圓的句號可會是最痛快的結局
《你我》或許只不過是歷代詩人抒發的偶然
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新詩創作『夢』字
Published:
Sep 28, 2022
ENTRY #8
賈寶玉的夢
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Published:
Sep 28, 2022
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