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夢凝騎士團
Kumo
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原創港漫《夢凝騎士團》
舞臺是中_大學。
這裡的夢境，是給人用另我身份生活的平行世界。
反映出心底理想的秘境、是否一場毫無後果、醒來就灰飛煙滅的夢呢？

**建議先開最新一話試試水溫先**

「胡蝶之夢為周與？」
*連載中*

@cuhkacs

@doribasu_

第二話動畫PV：


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閱畢作品
確切體會到作者整個暑假投入之熱情

人物設計不錯
尤其莉莉婭 重武女僕說是王道也不過為
港式「貼地」則賦其另一種親切感

作者的努力在分鏡中亦可見一班
雖然部份受畫功所限
但不少戰鬥場面仍能表現出張力 如第8頁的俯身向前
以初作來說是相當不錯

唯改進建議有二
- 減少部份背景比重 以免畫面失焦
- 減少戰鬥場面的對話 留空間讀者自行補完
3 years ago ⋅ 1 replyReply
Kumo
嗯，都留意到自己仲拿捏緊幾時要show個場景，同埋幾時比讀者自由去思考。多謝你嘅留言同支持！
3 years ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
原創 奇幻 冒險 香港作者 架空 漫畫 廣東話
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Last updated: Oct 7, 2023
Total word count: 95
Total reading time: 1 Minute
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Kumo
原創 奇幻 冒險 香港作者 架空 漫畫 廣東話
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