/story/110244/黑歷史博物館/issue/5
黑歷史博物館 - 這個是我中三時的一份功課... | Penana
arrow_back
黑歷史博物館
more_vert
  • info_outline Info
  • toc Table of Contents
  • share Share
  • format_color_text Display Settings
  • exposure_plus_1 Recommend
  • coins Sponsor
  • report_problem Report
  • account_circle Login
share bookmark_border
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 4
exposure_plus_1
coins
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
400coins awarded
黑歷史博物館
ENTRY #5
Author: 笑具
Published:
Sep 3, 2022
黑歷史博物館
Published:
Sep 3, 2022
ENTRY #5
這個是我中三時的一份功課...
Author: 笑具
Published:
Sep 3, 2022
1 Min Read
104 Words
No Plagiarism!rEbzPg0ybOkMcl3q5kq9posted on PＥNAＮＡ

好啦其實沒有想像中那麼黑。這是中三時作為功課寫的新詩 （功課就是要我們寫新詩，不是我自己要寫，相信我）

改善點：

讀完左邊第一段後不知道要讀那一段（其實是讀下面那一段）

標題請放回上面

字好醜

完全沒有解釋為甚麼其中一個要跳樓，有夠突然的 

463Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCjkD8FOX3J

216.73.217.114

ns216.73.217.114da2
Comments (4)
BOOKMARK
+RECOMMEND
LIKES 4
READS 459
BOOKMARKS 2
Sponsor
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to comment or bookmark!
< Prev Issue
Next Issue >
Click to load the next chapter
至冬 朝
任夢飛 Remy Flynn
郭凝輝
御晴
X
X
Login first to show your name as a sponsor.

Pena Coins Credit Card

×
黑歷史博物館
Question
Creator's Pick
✪ Submission Closed
Contest Holder:
郭凝輝
No tags yet.
Report this story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.