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黑歷史博物館
ENTRY #5
Author: 笑具
Published:
Sep 3, 2022
黑歷史博物館
Published:
Sep 3, 2022
ENTRY #5
這個是我中三時的一份功課...
Author: 笑具
Published:
Sep 3, 2022
1 Min Read
104 Words
No Plagiarism!UACFwCb26Qd5Q455C7r5posted on PＥNAＮＡ

好啦其實沒有想像中那麼黑。這是中三時作為功課寫的新詩 （功課就是要我們寫新詩，不是我自己要寫，相信我）

改善點：

讀完左邊第一段後不知道要讀那一段（其實是讀下面那一段）

標題請放回上面

字好醜

完全沒有解釋為甚麼其中一個要跳樓，有夠突然的 

145Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYxsimdpm7C

172.70.178.215

ns 172.70.178.215da2
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