感謝芝沫的推薦~最近因為工作有點忙所以都沒去看創挑,這個形式還蠻新鮮的也可以推坑大家XD878Please respect copyright.PENANAW3ietbE69p
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《艾婭的悲劇》*注意本篇小說為R18878Please respect copyright.PENANAEGQUTxVDPx
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作者:車車龜878Please respect copyright.PENANAZY9AJY5yVF
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連結:https://www.penana.com/story/93410/艾婭的悲劇878Please respect copyright.PENANAru6SBZoqhy
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作品優點:878Please respect copyright.PENANAvQnCMRZH9R
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1)把女主的情緒刻畫很到位,讓讀者更能理解女主行動背後的原因以及心境轉變,不會讓人有種女主周旋在各男主間養魚的後宮感,細膩的描寫讓女主對於他們的態度變得合理而不是為了撒糖而撒糖,也讓女主只能屈服於部分狀況的場景顯得十分無奈。878Please respect copyright.PENANAdn0Gre949Q
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2)因為近幾年重生惡役系列超級爛大街,所以一開始看到這部沒有所謂的綠茶原女主就有點好奇點開來看了,而這種上一世死於非命的女主作品一般都是在重生後獲得了外掛然後藉由時間線紅利先把攻略角拉攏到己方再痛快打綠茶原女主的臉來讓觀眾獲得那一瞬間的爽感。而這部則是在重生後女主依然處於弱勢方,即使在後來有了男主們的幫忙,也只是從絕對弱勢變得相對弱勢,作者把女主每一個決策都如履薄冰的氛圍給描述得相當好,卻又不會為了硬要黑深殘而讓讀者越看越壓抑,中間偶爾插入較為輕鬆的劇情也是個很加分的一項,因為這部的主線是走黑暗的路線,適當地轉換氣氛可以有利於讀者轉換心情不至於讓人覺得疲勞。878Please respect copyright.PENANADvxIT9aJgU
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3)每個男主都有明確的定位,而且目前給男主們的戲份描寫也相當均勻,不會有某個人有強烈的官配感(這個見仁見智,因為這樣買錯股的可能性也會變高比如羅x拉的重生之夜我就買錯股了QQ),而且每個人對於女主都有不同的意義,不會有誰比誰地位更高的問題,在男主們的權重比拿捏得剛剛好。878Please respect copyright.PENANAC1SeX77dOU
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作者值得被打賞的理由:878Please respect copyright.PENANAyjsG17DILX
1)作者常常會寫特別篇給大家吃糧還很公平人人有份,讚讚。878Please respect copyright.PENANAbyLCK13MHq
2)更新定期且偶爾不定時加更,所以不會有拖更問題。878Please respect copyright.PENANACOKpYkjACi
3)作者平易近人都會回復留言+聽讀者許願,戴爾股必須推推。878Please respect copyright.PENANARKS1M4e7Nd
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承接了芝沫的上一棒,下一個就交給車車龜了~878Please respect copyright.PENANA8meN9mKUfJ
也很感謝黑正自掏腰包辦這個有趣的創挑,讓大家可以一起互相交流一起winwin~
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第四屆 黑正杯 創作挑戰【推薦接龍】
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