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關於寫作的各種怪癖
ENTRY #16
Author: 御晴
Published:
Aug 30, 2022
關於寫作的各種怪癖
Published:
Aug 30, 2022
ENTRY #16
文筆（強逼症？）
Author: 御晴
Published:
Aug 30, 2022
1 Min Read
155 Words
No Plagiarism!jjHD5is15huLFExK5I9Zposted on PＥNAＮＡ

如題，我寫文很重視文筆。自己寫了平鋪直敘的句式會忍不住修飾。看到被我修飾過的句子多了很多修辭、角色的動作甚至是情感，心裡就很滿足。

375Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ1JzP0py23

可是，小說結果就越來越長了。

375Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn4YQbx1jTl

記得以前國文老師改我的作文也點出相同的問題：你的文筆有時候就不懂得收放，也有點煽情。

375Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBrzPNMw1js

在這裡，看見各位大大寫出簡潔的文句，我也想學習一下呢。

375Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1vN9RDi4fD

現在給自己的寫作目標是，希望可以學會精煉文筆。

375Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkiJEk5geMI

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