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推薦別人的作品
ENTRY #6
Author: 斟墨客 。 迷
Published:
Aug 21, 2016
推薦別人的作品
Published:
Aug 21, 2016
ENTRY #6
驀然回首
Author: 斟墨客 。 迷
Published:
Aug 21, 2016
1 Min Read
191 Words
No Plagiarism!4NM91eyUK2mDXRb59qgEposted on PＥNAＮＡ

@可莉姆

我看到題目馬上就點了，因為本人也很喜歡辛棄疾，拿他的詩當開頭，覺得很有味道。

小可的文章，排版排的很好(這個很重要，所以放第一點。

然後，對於描述，文辭很細膩，文句也很通順，老實說我挑不出毛病。

有些人的文章感情放的非常非常重，讓人看得有些沉重，缺少描述，不然就是全部寫故事，情感少，但小可卻把兩者的比例分配的恰到好處。

整篇給人一種清新淡雅的feel，充滿無限的青春，對！就是青春，我覺得這是校園愛情最重要的。

總之，大推驀然回首

小可快更啊！

216.73.217.39

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