1.0 核心表現力168Please respect copyright.PENANAdy7nqKi1BZ
以懸念型的小說為例,核心表現力是:168Please respect copyright.PENANAOAItevWOq9
a. 過去(日常):簡單的細節入手,塑造環境不安全168Please respect copyright.PENANApWgney8p4a
b. 現在(懸念):不安全的異常描述168Please respect copyright.PENANAT55OmWJZrA
c. 未來(心理):探索人的身邊和心理,各種荒誕的可能性
2.0 爽感168Please respect copyright.PENANAqLz0mUTOIg
表現力的最終目標,是帶給讀者爽感。168Please respect copyright.PENANAGm5MyVATl0
如果單純只有爽點,而沒有爽感,那麼這種表現力是錯誤的。168Please respect copyright.PENANASRwaR7du1c
常見的爽點雷區:168Please respect copyright.PENANA3CHlaPGJMH
a. 俗氣,如亂葬坑,紅高跟鞋,紅嫁衣,笑聲,哭聲,水聲168Please respect copyright.PENANArVTMNtnhu5
b. 虛假,如靈力捉鬼,寶石,水晶,這些是都市爽文,而非懸念168Please respect copyright.PENANA8beqnigksW
c. 空洞,如鬼手突然出現,缺乏了像環境、推理、心理這些表現力
3.0 主線劇情168Please respect copyright.PENANAu9ES1uVg33
首先必需理解表現力和爽感,之後才能懂得設計好看的主線劇情。
3.1 人設+三條主線168Please respect copyright.PENANA9LeO9hOBUr
以【治癒】和【惡夢】兩書作為藍本,它們的架構有相似之處。168Please respect copyright.PENANArVrAnE6Tg2
a. 賣人設(不會有恐懼/社恐)168Please respect copyright.PENANA7nHUD07Pp8
b. 功法線(開局比別人強,裝備,夥伴,天賦,等級)168Please respect copyright.PENANAQQwhzuScn6
c. 刷副本地圖線(幸福社區,益民社區)168Please respect copyright.PENANALMoKTU2oKu
d. 世界觀歷史線(惡夢病毒,大boss蝴蝶的)
3.2 主線劇情服務於表現力,目標是給讀者爽感168Please respect copyright.PENANA88f4qfWoer
首先,人設+三條主線,設定了故事的賣點(長篇架構)168Please respect copyright.PENANAw1VxDaFVXD
然後,用釣子懸念設立期待感(懸念)168Please respect copyright.PENANASBsMsuCgGU
接著,完成任務和探索地圖的表現力(核心爽感)168Please respect copyright.PENANA76VHANYhMA
最後,才是傳統意義上的爽點(榮譽感,越級挑戰,獲取裝備夥伴功法,升級,打臉)168Please respect copyright.PENANA36tQ9zAgbM
這是一個累進過程,像上圖中的三維空間會愈來愈大,而架構則幫助了小說不易寫崩。
3.3 功法線的表現力 168Please respect copyright.PENANAw2wOsNDXaU
主角的功法線有四個維度,包括:168Please respect copyright.PENANAjlEJLe7cMs
a. 裝備:168Please respect copyright.PENANAwCwrlL1Q9v
裝備必需有限制性,如時間限制、消耗品,而絕不能是無敵流裝備168Please respect copyright.PENANAaS6hKUmPcK
攻擊裝備:主角用作關鍵尾刀168Please respect copyright.PENANA6wq4lbXsng
防禦裝備:主角前期太弱,需要消耗型防裝168Please respect copyright.PENANAbtTfZKZgPJ
b. 寵物:(加成型)168Please respect copyright.PENANAXPAGdji844
c. 夥伴:(法師範圍型,戰士物傷型,刺客偷襲型)168Please respect copyright.PENANAKxT6fvECVD
d. 天賦:(成長型)
168Please respect copyright.PENANAVCCgKhWfjU