1. 講故事的差異406Please respect copyright.PENANAOT5rUtqN7O
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡406Please respect copyright.PENANA6PsPtNGTXC
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)406Please respect copyright.PENANA69GnQnlNn4
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色406Please respect copyright.PENANAcstQ9QH5mA
看點:406Please respect copyright.PENANAoLLmRWgrnV
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動406Please respect copyright.PENANAnlrtORHhst
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀406Please respect copyright.PENANArIsFpLBTRk
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅406Please respect copyright.PENANAPxzZJJBT0A
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力406Please respect copyright.PENANA38ZivAry2J
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾406Please respect copyright.PENANAMdrjvI2skW
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)406Please respect copyright.PENANAatIpwGnNqw
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點406Please respect copyright.PENANAoayZvFM5uD
看點:406Please respect copyright.PENANAgiI6MVQ7Dr
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼406Please respect copyright.PENANAE1Ap8aZyrd
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事406Please respect copyright.PENANAKIIgqXyOqr
c. 有趣的劇情406Please respect copyright.PENANAYXhPVQ1xdg
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意406Please respect copyright.PENANA91HXD0SiyU
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾406Please respect copyright.PENANAjIB5Atmdks
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇406Please respect copyright.PENANAJmDHKYG4XX
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。406Please respect copyright.PENANAPaad85BoQ2
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:406Please respect copyright.PENANAbWGVYWl1wY
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。406Please respect copyright.PENANAoX3cT8b1Be
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。406Please respect copyright.PENANAwPWNxRsbN5
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷406Please respect copyright.PENANAKAu9EdnCt6
曾經搞錯過的賣點:406Please respect copyright.PENANAWXt3kphJE4
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。406Please respect copyright.PENANAZDF2F74yNY
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。406Please respect copyright.PENANAemEEqfNul1
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。406Please respect copyright.PENANAV7VJNoP8MI
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。406Please respect copyright.PENANAbnHeXYahEe
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。