1. 講故事的差異394Please respect copyright.PENANA1kGYB6XsUi
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡394Please respect copyright.PENANAskORiXFOlO
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)394Please respect copyright.PENANAV9HAXE0a0i
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色394Please respect copyright.PENANAKbzaUkxzu8
看點:394Please respect copyright.PENANAQ2MwKAhsaR
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動394Please respect copyright.PENANAYqQoP6O1GM
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀394Please respect copyright.PENANArB14f3b90U
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅394Please respect copyright.PENANATVeX6ww0BP
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力394Please respect copyright.PENANAJQEUPguSio
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾394Please respect copyright.PENANA6IcfhqC7O1
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)394Please respect copyright.PENANAhm11O9O0Re
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點394Please respect copyright.PENANA1fppZl5tZz
看點:394Please respect copyright.PENANAsTSFGgfeqq
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼394Please respect copyright.PENANAztgvs0HxR4
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事394Please respect copyright.PENANAfwIaKwnAZa
c. 有趣的劇情394Please respect copyright.PENANAs7s6PQVznc
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意394Please respect copyright.PENANAF1ZEGWfuW8
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾394Please respect copyright.PENANAWTpESM91Sx
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇394Please respect copyright.PENANA9NTvdaAVKZ
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。394Please respect copyright.PENANA5r2SQqoGD0
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:394Please respect copyright.PENANAKBYvnUSRr9
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。394Please respect copyright.PENANAwIhsb2LGRG
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。394Please respect copyright.PENANATuaKugBqOE
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷394Please respect copyright.PENANALTc4Dum81c
曾經搞錯過的賣點:394Please respect copyright.PENANAYJWnQgbB4j
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。394Please respect copyright.PENANAU14D9m4hWk
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。394Please respect copyright.PENANAslbogK7PNL
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。394Please respect copyright.PENANAjwDKz4eIZE
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。394Please respect copyright.PENANA6VmxXJjGkI
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。