1. 講故事的差異433Please respect copyright.PENANAM7LB7AW2fd
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡433Please respect copyright.PENANAnYmM11iFiL
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)433Please respect copyright.PENANA4aHTJ4gyO6
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色433Please respect copyright.PENANALwBVxOzM6F
看點:433Please respect copyright.PENANAhNm1mVmhod
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動433Please respect copyright.PENANADf0o3igLrS
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀433Please respect copyright.PENANAXHWbjn6Sqi
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅433Please respect copyright.PENANAFOOssZy9gp
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力433Please respect copyright.PENANAmyFAbhYaS8
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾433Please respect copyright.PENANA5YwVivQgj2
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)433Please respect copyright.PENANAwHEV9Dwt9C
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點433Please respect copyright.PENANA0N3pJKneK5
看點:433Please respect copyright.PENANA4ZnOTVL7ZO
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼433Please respect copyright.PENANAakybtQGP36
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事433Please respect copyright.PENANALaoipB6eLz
c. 有趣的劇情433Please respect copyright.PENANANnqqXr5qbX
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意433Please respect copyright.PENANA7Zka7hKzQd
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾433Please respect copyright.PENANAphR8o06fCS
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇433Please respect copyright.PENANA8HALnBaTYt
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。433Please respect copyright.PENANAmyOKjWlsMM
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:433Please respect copyright.PENANA8A2qXhBVsz
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。433Please respect copyright.PENANAgQQ5MtkmvJ
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。433Please respect copyright.PENANAE9yaw0vy9R
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷433Please respect copyright.PENANATV4yRGRVhO
曾經搞錯過的賣點:433Please respect copyright.PENANA7buNCEnJNK
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。433Please respect copyright.PENANAcRD3ErJJRX
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。433Please respect copyright.PENANAGllkz1JP3a
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。433Please respect copyright.PENANATMCGUIJg2F
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。433Please respect copyright.PENANADdow85lLO3
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。