1. 講故事的差異540Please respect copyright.PENANAtSxBGCBEOj
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡540Please respect copyright.PENANArJRsdbzzOw
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)540Please respect copyright.PENANA6VzSl5FdvV
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色540Please respect copyright.PENANAGj1dGPYpdH
看點:540Please respect copyright.PENANAWboYYdhkFH
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動540Please respect copyright.PENANAVnTGTqDss3
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀540Please respect copyright.PENANAM0QeUNFH4F
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅540Please respect copyright.PENANABtN7z8Rw1t
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力540Please respect copyright.PENANApisg36qIhT
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾540Please respect copyright.PENANALUN1aXeu3Y
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)540Please respect copyright.PENANAzinyp1G7Ov
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點540Please respect copyright.PENANAngzX30KNwK
看點:540Please respect copyright.PENANAQgFSqRtgy4
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼540Please respect copyright.PENANAN7cWN9g4HB
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事540Please respect copyright.PENANAGjGwWiEV8T
c. 有趣的劇情540Please respect copyright.PENANABmPzrBx8CN
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意540Please respect copyright.PENANA2gh1dFBmOO
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾540Please respect copyright.PENANAR6Z4VCLCXP
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇540Please respect copyright.PENANAa3goMkSpWw
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。540Please respect copyright.PENANAAWMkqkLNOu
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:540Please respect copyright.PENANAsdLI5IGMfZ
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。540Please respect copyright.PENANAhVEiQAsTNv
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。540Please respect copyright.PENANAAEWs2M58YQ
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷540Please respect copyright.PENANA7gv24S3ewH
曾經搞錯過的賣點:540Please respect copyright.PENANAVGyKrrENvl
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。540Please respect copyright.PENANAh2WITrs5Ry
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。540Please respect copyright.PENANA5drD1UmRcC
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。540Please respect copyright.PENANA2sk1OzmIgO
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。540Please respect copyright.PENANAIuqoaRcbj0
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。