1.0 核心表現力354Please respect copyright.PENANAyPxlQktkNw
以懸念型的小說為例,核心表現力是:354Please respect copyright.PENANAVqgot2UCw1
a. 過去(日常):簡單的細節入手,塑造環境不安全354Please respect copyright.PENANAxOfeJXENkU
b. 現在(懸念):不安全的異常描述354Please respect copyright.PENANAR4FI79bUYT
c. 未來(心理):探索人的身邊和心理,各種荒誕的可能性
2.0 爽感354Please respect copyright.PENANA0O2mH1eHz7
表現力的最終目標,是帶給讀者爽感。354Please respect copyright.PENANAwECgog8kMl
如果單純只有爽點,而沒有爽感,那麼這種表現力是錯誤的。354Please respect copyright.PENANACPTBXm09ZO
常見的爽點雷區:354Please respect copyright.PENANAGLVI0Qnx5C
a. 俗氣,如亂葬坑,紅高跟鞋,紅嫁衣,笑聲,哭聲,水聲354Please respect copyright.PENANAMOgW4g3JIl
b. 虛假,如靈力捉鬼,寶石,水晶,這些是都市爽文,而非懸念354Please respect copyright.PENANAJqa16QtvnA
c. 空洞,如鬼手突然出現,缺乏了像環境、推理、心理這些表現力
3.0 主線劇情354Please respect copyright.PENANAdpeXioZRI4
首先必需理解表現力和爽感,之後才能懂得設計好看的主線劇情。
3.1 人設+三條主線354Please respect copyright.PENANAijhJInlwXO
以【治癒】和【惡夢】兩書作為藍本,它們的架構有相似之處。354Please respect copyright.PENANAXKtm6IuBJp
a. 賣人設(不會有恐懼/社恐)354Please respect copyright.PENANAQ2nhQhMTZ2
b. 功法線(開局比別人強,裝備,夥伴,天賦,等級)354Please respect copyright.PENANA5d83svQa7k
c. 刷副本地圖線(幸福社區,益民社區)354Please respect copyright.PENANAiJdEWr26lq
d. 世界觀歷史線(惡夢病毒,大boss蝴蝶的)
3.2 主線劇情服務於表現力,目標是給讀者爽感354Please respect copyright.PENANADiI0KUgApU
首先,人設+三條主線,設定了故事的賣點(長篇架構)354Please respect copyright.PENANAWl2fQvYaSM
然後,用釣子懸念設立期待感(懸念)354Please respect copyright.PENANA9FfuHCITmL
接著,完成任務和探索地圖的表現力(核心爽感)354Please respect copyright.PENANAlIjFgm821H
最後,才是傳統意義上的爽點(榮譽感,越級挑戰,獲取裝備夥伴功法,升級,打臉)354Please respect copyright.PENANAGWayISB3Sy
這是一個累進過程,像上圖中的三維空間會愈來愈大,而架構則幫助了小說不易寫崩。
3.3 功法線的表現力 354Please respect copyright.PENANA3JyOfCsokw
主角的功法線有四個維度,包括:354Please respect copyright.PENANAUVoFgPE7Jx
a. 裝備:354Please respect copyright.PENANA20MmSwO92H
裝備必需有限制性,如時間限制、消耗品,而絕不能是無敵流裝備354Please respect copyright.PENANA2yi4cGt0IQ
攻擊裝備:主角用作關鍵尾刀354Please respect copyright.PENANAOCBZ5xKNry
防禦裝備:主角前期太弱,需要消耗型防裝354Please respect copyright.PENANAQvpeTxOMyz
b. 寵物:(加成型)354Please respect copyright.PENANA5RINoCObiT
c. 夥伴:(法師範圍型,戰士物傷型,刺客偷襲型)354Please respect copyright.PENANAMYU7knbRSC
d. 天賦:(成長型)
354Please respect copyright.PENANAeZberaKuwV