1.0 核心表現力319Please respect copyright.PENANAMqx9ON5LIp
以懸念型的小說為例,核心表現力是:319Please respect copyright.PENANACEJRFDQpY4
a. 過去(日常):簡單的細節入手,塑造環境不安全319Please respect copyright.PENANAWGN9b2cqnj
b. 現在(懸念):不安全的異常描述319Please respect copyright.PENANAm4F4nkZEa7
c. 未來(心理):探索人的身邊和心理,各種荒誕的可能性
2.0 爽感319Please respect copyright.PENANAuKf9wf1fPb
表現力的最終目標,是帶給讀者爽感。319Please respect copyright.PENANAROGteIMhCx
如果單純只有爽點,而沒有爽感,那麼這種表現力是錯誤的。319Please respect copyright.PENANAiBQNAJCl2K
常見的爽點雷區:319Please respect copyright.PENANAsuriZHSDX3
a. 俗氣,如亂葬坑,紅高跟鞋,紅嫁衣,笑聲,哭聲,水聲319Please respect copyright.PENANAnTptwTxp41
b. 虛假,如靈力捉鬼,寶石,水晶,這些是都市爽文,而非懸念319Please respect copyright.PENANAox8NMZAx7h
c. 空洞,如鬼手突然出現,缺乏了像環境、推理、心理這些表現力
3.0 主線劇情319Please respect copyright.PENANAn5pudqDRA2
首先必需理解表現力和爽感,之後才能懂得設計好看的主線劇情。
3.1 人設+三條主線319Please respect copyright.PENANAvkjY3NivZr
以【治癒】和【惡夢】兩書作為藍本,它們的架構有相似之處。319Please respect copyright.PENANAu4BrImBL79
a. 賣人設(不會有恐懼/社恐)319Please respect copyright.PENANAVnra8Wy9JK
b. 功法線(開局比別人強,裝備,夥伴,天賦,等級)319Please respect copyright.PENANASIfmrXSDnY
c. 刷副本地圖線(幸福社區,益民社區)319Please respect copyright.PENANAw82FXkJ73m
d. 世界觀歷史線(惡夢病毒,大boss蝴蝶的)
3.2 主線劇情服務於表現力,目標是給讀者爽感319Please respect copyright.PENANADU2VIe7Tzp
首先,人設+三條主線,設定了故事的賣點(長篇架構)319Please respect copyright.PENANAHpimleKSGP
然後,用釣子懸念設立期待感(懸念)319Please respect copyright.PENANAUtw2LP7jkb
接著,完成任務和探索地圖的表現力(核心爽感)319Please respect copyright.PENANADjkscuncyF
最後,才是傳統意義上的爽點(榮譽感,越級挑戰,獲取裝備夥伴功法,升級,打臉)319Please respect copyright.PENANA2X3n0K8j7q
這是一個累進過程,像上圖中的三維空間會愈來愈大,而架構則幫助了小說不易寫崩。
3.3 功法線的表現力 319Please respect copyright.PENANAYHfcIVFe3o
主角的功法線有四個維度,包括:319Please respect copyright.PENANAEpxZci1Dvs
a. 裝備:319Please respect copyright.PENANAgkD37jfZRc
裝備必需有限制性,如時間限制、消耗品,而絕不能是無敵流裝備319Please respect copyright.PENANAa7x34C2fle
攻擊裝備:主角用作關鍵尾刀319Please respect copyright.PENANAUSZ0i1k3kY
防禦裝備:主角前期太弱,需要消耗型防裝319Please respect copyright.PENANATPMyqqZG9b
b. 寵物:(加成型)319Please respect copyright.PENANAcKgzMW10oT
c. 夥伴:(法師範圍型,戰士物傷型,刺客偷襲型)319Please respect copyright.PENANAEv2tJcWO4o
d. 天賦:(成長型)
319Please respect copyright.PENANAiMvgUrBUhP