1. 講故事的差異537Please respect copyright.PENANAP19IDicqJn
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡537Please respect copyright.PENANAdQbu2Yfzjm
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)537Please respect copyright.PENANAnPO6RP15rE
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色537Please respect copyright.PENANAqNX79URgpE
看點:537Please respect copyright.PENANA7TFjMC376H
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動537Please respect copyright.PENANAuLE7eKu6ja
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀537Please respect copyright.PENANAP4ap8I9BGc
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅537Please respect copyright.PENANAs8vCMNDVHM
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力537Please respect copyright.PENANA7Q05SFCT19
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾537Please respect copyright.PENANAMFgMILClKe
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)537Please respect copyright.PENANAA9ijbABYvF
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點537Please respect copyright.PENANAQFV6Zm0Ugo
看點:537Please respect copyright.PENANAfYAlTh3X6q
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼537Please respect copyright.PENANAOm2xKFj1wd
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事537Please respect copyright.PENANADAejskxUrT
c. 有趣的劇情537Please respect copyright.PENANAyX1kBh7Fyd
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意537Please respect copyright.PENANA6Mrz5bTRGq
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾537Please respect copyright.PENANATvEQSfBkco
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇537Please respect copyright.PENANAfzNdqdOoQU
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。537Please respect copyright.PENANAJpEQbPd4gj
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:537Please respect copyright.PENANA6lXdipfiDu
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。537Please respect copyright.PENANAhqGvIfYGpB
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。537Please respect copyright.PENANA8zzr88EJAs
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷537Please respect copyright.PENANAczXX5mOL6p
曾經搞錯過的賣點:537Please respect copyright.PENANAlZQTrLv3dq
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。537Please respect copyright.PENANAq673p9lFS2
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。537Please respect copyright.PENANAa7SJu3vFPz
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。537Please respect copyright.PENANANDlMqthKvf
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。537Please respect copyright.PENANAmqBDZyn5nc
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。