1. 講故事的差異530Please respect copyright.PENANA3eGMfWPQV4
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡530Please respect copyright.PENANA71DKH7aKcU
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)530Please respect copyright.PENANAbcWEIjQsPf
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色530Please respect copyright.PENANAHwRRKwLJNU
看點:530Please respect copyright.PENANAPtUquJzmmI
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動530Please respect copyright.PENANAG1edbDw2nv
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀530Please respect copyright.PENANAgwHsp0NtJm
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅530Please respect copyright.PENANA21PwJkOioS
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力530Please respect copyright.PENANAFOBDOl8awj
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾530Please respect copyright.PENANAd7XKDuuO9I
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)530Please respect copyright.PENANAHNyr1xJEDa
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點530Please respect copyright.PENANAdjZgdiQ9hJ
看點:530Please respect copyright.PENANACMsDbsW2Pm
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼530Please respect copyright.PENANAneeKBcfQLK
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事530Please respect copyright.PENANABcKwoxJg3R
c. 有趣的劇情530Please respect copyright.PENANAzlFeyIWX6p
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意530Please respect copyright.PENANAIB9v76T2M7
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾530Please respect copyright.PENANAeJqJdG8HCH
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇530Please respect copyright.PENANA1tfJGg4f4E
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。530Please respect copyright.PENANAOkl8VGrgOm
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:530Please respect copyright.PENANA28L8h5wazO
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。530Please respect copyright.PENANArkugMuFoHo
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。530Please respect copyright.PENANAiJ91TThcVl
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷530Please respect copyright.PENANAOQpMVfGUFl
曾經搞錯過的賣點:530Please respect copyright.PENANAQ8qvFQAbZJ
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。530Please respect copyright.PENANA9sQCpum7x3
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。530Please respect copyright.PENANAGGZ5RnB7UP
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。530Please respect copyright.PENANAdz0vVy32Lt
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。530Please respect copyright.PENANA74hrwc7JKx
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。