1. 講故事的差異395Please respect copyright.PENANAZINQWGtvsk
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡395Please respect copyright.PENANAPKbnjLOno3
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)395Please respect copyright.PENANAm4EPo8RJui
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色395Please respect copyright.PENANA5c6DVVFyBD
看點:395Please respect copyright.PENANAxjcHbFMIgT
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動395Please respect copyright.PENANA55gU18tbDT
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀395Please respect copyright.PENANAzCYUnlz966
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅395Please respect copyright.PENANAeTDT1OHyDv
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力395Please respect copyright.PENANA6cQa3NDOY1
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾395Please respect copyright.PENANALHYC5Zchgt
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)395Please respect copyright.PENANA5UgqBjOwDR
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點395Please respect copyright.PENANAQWEyuudhaS
看點:395Please respect copyright.PENANAnxSb2s09rx
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼395Please respect copyright.PENANAesUHXE7WeX
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事395Please respect copyright.PENANATRW9bA3IYl
c. 有趣的劇情395Please respect copyright.PENANAq2Q7FsXFs9
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意395Please respect copyright.PENANA8hesKXDX0v
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾395Please respect copyright.PENANA0y1PFQh4qT
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇395Please respect copyright.PENANAfOo02EC0aS
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。395Please respect copyright.PENANAptRKnPSLhy
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:395Please respect copyright.PENANAwY8rPwxxTf
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。395Please respect copyright.PENANAHCEmOZvQAV
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。395Please respect copyright.PENANAMXnMiW51u1
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷395Please respect copyright.PENANA7MfWxrDuAo
曾經搞錯過的賣點:395Please respect copyright.PENANA0CCFoNoCK8
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。395Please respect copyright.PENANAbE0P704YOO
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。395Please respect copyright.PENANAdTBEOWxZDj
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。395Please respect copyright.PENANAn62nnEDoLr
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。395Please respect copyright.PENANAAYrRvDCOZR
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。