同小倩傾完個電話,與其話係收集緊林昭煌嘅惡行,倒不如話挖咗阿仁一大堆黑歷史出嚟。460Please respect copyright.PENANA8MBbOF7q4U
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到目前爲止,我暫時未睇到究竟林昭煌做咗d乜嘢傷天害理嘅事,需要阿仁同成班舊登網友圍攻佢。嚴格嚟講,佢只係好巧妙咁運用咗一d說話技巧,令到小倩、阿駒同阿民三個都對佢產生好感。460Please respect copyright.PENANAeXFZQ30E6h
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我坐響電腦面前,打咗一堆連大綱都稱不上嘅文字,大部份嘢都只係單方面從小倩果度聽番嚟嘅經歷同感受,照直寫成劇本嘅話,雖然唔可以話係無聊,但絕對唔係阿仁想用嚟對付林昭煌嘅嘢囉。460Please respect copyright.PENANABIb8gYQ3uX
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點算好?460Please respect copyright.PENANAt2UNwrPO6k
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乾脆老作,堆砌一個故事出嚟就算?460Please respect copyright.PENANAJNmxJL3rgd
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我合埋眼,已經預見到俾班知情嘅讀者屌到開花嘅畫面。460Please respect copyright.PENANAzUzO4Dc7JP
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可惜我冇辦法直接聯絡林昭煌,聽聽佢果邊嘅版本。460Please respect copyright.PENANAmIGN1kknv9
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我前前後後寫咗六個版本嘅大綱,每次都係卡響資料不足呢件事上面。到最後我真係唔知點落筆,索性攤響床睇吓阿仁俾我嘅果張受害人名單。呢張名單上面最少有五、六個女仔嘅聯絡方法,旁邊寫住佢哋俾昭煌呃嘅金額,同埋佢哋同昭煌一起咗幾耐。460Please respect copyright.PENANAe7zEXi7oQI
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然後,我發現,有部份女仔同昭煌一齊嘅時間係重疊嘅。460Please respect copyright.PENANANcNm1piclm
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「呢個世界係咪黐線㗎,條友咁嘅尊容,竟然可以同時食幾條女,仲氹到班女仔俾錢佢洗!?」460Please respect copyright.PENANAr4obb3uhHb
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我望住名單上面嘅金額,有人俾佢呃幾千、有人俾佢呃果萬,最犀利果個係六位數字嚟。460Please respect copyright.PENANAB1bDxABVhD
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唔怪之得果陣舊登咁多人當呢條友係偶像....460Please respect copyright.PENANAVUq3BQTPV3
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採訪完小倩嘅一個禮拜後,我終於嘔咗個劇本大綱出嚟。460Please respect copyright.PENANAbGq1fdM8WK
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但係,呢份嘢,我自己係唔滿意嘅,因爲我係完全由小倩嘅角度出發,寫咗一個好悲情嘅劇本,講述一個女仔點樣俾個衰人騙財騙色,從而達到阿仁想踢爆林昭煌嘅惡行,令聽衆聲討呢個人嘅目的。460Please respect copyright.PENANAvZ7bgfnTs8
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而咁樣寫法令到個故事好片面,片面到我有少少說服唔到自己。460Please respect copyright.PENANAwmwBYIiyxF
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林昭煌呢個人絕對唔只口才好、識捉心理咁簡單。而我所寫嘅大綱,係完全無將林昭煌呢個人好立體咁描繪出嚟。460Please respect copyright.PENANAQvHlSoTe4V
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「唔緊要啦,我要嘅係noise,你做到呢點嘅話,其他嘢我冇所謂。」460Please respect copyright.PENANA3LDsdeLqm4
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聽到阿仁咁講嘅時候,我個心沉咗一沉。要noise,最簡單直接方法就係加甜,咁多個女受害人,將佢哋點俾人呃上床嘅經過,甚至係鉅細無遺咁將佢哋同林昭煌嘅性愛場面寫出嚟,聽衆甚至係讀者都一定有反應。460Please respect copyright.PENANAw2pPowJF56
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但若果我咁寫的話,我點同班女受害人交代?460Please respect copyright.PENANAWs5P2WkIjf
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人哋肯接受訪問,講番當年嘅受害經過,挖緊自己嘅瘡疤俾我用嚟寫劇。而我就將個故事嘅重點擺響佢哋點俾人屌.....?460Please respect copyright.PENANAh7SHUdpI36
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我覺得呢件事直接同我嘅底線有牴觸。460Please respect copyright.PENANArJaaqSUCpo
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我想了解林昭煌呢個人,了解佢嘅心態、動機、思考模式、伎倆,由佢點接觸受害人、點埋身、點攻陷對方、點引導對方上床,再響上床之後點處理同受害人之間嘅關係。460Please respect copyright.PENANAvIppdYGDfX
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「即係,你想寫本呃蝦條攻略囉。」阿仁撩住鼻,一臉不在乎咁講,「我都講咗,只要有noise,你寫性愛記錄,抑或寫呃蝦條祕笈我都冇所謂。」460Please respect copyright.PENANAfe48fiByPG
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「就算加插假嘅嘢都冇所謂?」460Please respect copyright.PENANAAfblNuiBjo
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「響開頭加句『如有雷同,實屬巧合』就得啦。」460Please respect copyright.PENANAnujRAqmVal
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我望住阿仁,完全睇唔到小倩口中所講果個單純又努力嘅男仔。460Please respect copyright.PENANAL7tCYXRGDW
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究竟阿仁身上發生過咩事,會有咁大嘅轉變?460Please respect copyright.PENANAfkbuRVNFau
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「我嘅嘢你咪理啦。總之,我已經搵咗班網友幫手,成個班底由演員、主題曲、錄音、宣傳都有曬,而家就係差你個劇本。只要你唔好將昭煌捧到變成英雄人物,你要加甜我冇問題。」460Please respect copyright.PENANAYh0sN5cK1C
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阿仁雖然話寫完個劇本會俾番錢我,但我開始有d後悔接呢個job。460Please respect copyright.PENANAOXJLzLISaJ
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又過咗一個禮拜左右,呢段我不斷提住自己,要顧住班女受害人嘅感受嚟寫,但結果越寫就越綁手綁腳,劇情就越嚟越無聊。460Please respect copyright.PENANAEk83xtkuAc
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「諾斯,你認爲d偉人嘅傳記係咪100%忠於發生過嘅事?」460Please respect copyright.PENANAWyH23mrMMY
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阿仁又一次彈番份稿俾我,但我已經唔知點寫落去。460Please respect copyright.PENANAkNWEy2GBc4
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我想同所有人講,我唔係專業㗎,我係得咁多料,我......想認輸。460Please respect copyright.PENANAI4yyOhucD9
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「你做咩咁在意人哋點睇個故啫?冇公信力又如何?我只係要將林昭煌做過嘅衰嘢公諸於世,有冇教壞人、有冇擺假嘅劇情,便撚個會在意?你當自己係同出版社簽咗合約嘅著名作家?」460Please respect copyright.PENANAzNCTxAHA2M
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其實阿仁搵我寫個劇嘅時候,佢同幾個受害人已經響討論區爆緊林昭煌d衰嘢出嚟,就算冇個廣播劇,林昭煌呢個網絡騙子嘅事已經越來越多人知,件事遲早都會上報,所以我真係唔明點解佢咁執着做個廣播劇。460Please respect copyright.PENANAoregA6LsVc
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「爆料、見報都只係維持好短時間。昭煌呢個人,已經唔係一次兩次潛水換名然後又出嚟繼續呃人。我要留低一d嘢,就算四年後、八年後,只要有人聽番個劇,只要有人認得出佢個衰樣,佢去到邊都冇運行。」460Please respect copyright.PENANAeY4Zl0QP3u
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我聽到阿仁咁講呆咗呆,乜原來佢哋咁大仇口?460Please respect copyright.PENANAJEQZ2R0JIC
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小倩俾林昭煌騙財騙色件事發生響2010年,而我動筆寫廣播劇係2014年。當時,正好有幾個女仔上舊登爆料,佢哋描述個騙子嘅手法甚至係個樣,都同林昭煌一模一樣。換言之,呢四年間,林昭煌一直響度更換身份物色落手嘅對象。究竟佢會一直咁做到幾時?會唔會到今日依然潛伏係連登繼續搵食?460Please respect copyright.PENANAbwVIYJNxVV
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最終,我按照阿仁嘅「建議」,將部份劇情同設定作出修改,然後加甜。響我筆下嘅阿仁,依然係一個敦厚嘅毒撚,但現實中2014年嘅佢,諗嘢已經複雜好多,好多鬼主意,個腦成日響度諗各式各樣嘅計劃,但永遠唔會講曬全盤計劃俾任何人知。我相信寫到呢度,識阿仁嘅朋友應該都會認同,呢個人今時今日已經面目全非,甚至令我有d懷念故事入面依然係一名毒撚嘅佢。460Please respect copyright.PENANANI69iWLD3t
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大綱定咗落嚟之後,我就埋頭寫稿搞咗半個月。期間,阿仁話想約廣播劇製作組出嚟開會,所以我就漏夜趕起第一集嘅初稿,諗住攞出嚟俾大家睇啦,點知去到開會果日,阿仁突然截住叫我唔好攞份稿出嚟,話有樣嘢要大家做咗先喎。460Please respect copyright.PENANA5JPyPfZIP1
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「各位,我哋今日搞得呢個劇就係坐埋同一條船。」阿仁嘅開場白聽到我打咗個突,但正所謂你唔尷尬,尷尬嘅就係其他人,條友完全若無其事,繼續用「起義」口吻講,「大家都知昭煌呢排又開始響討論區搵食,今次仲有其他人響背後撐腰。所以,爲咗跟住落嚟要做嘅嘢,我呢度有份保密協議,麻煩各位簽咗佢,等大家都可以安心d。」460Please respect copyright.PENANAPnL2KmhYAU
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間房入面十幾個人原本食住Pizza氣氛好輕鬆嘅,結果阿仁講完,全場靜曬,大家一時間都唔知點俾反應。460Please respect copyright.PENANAuBHIMNzrBO
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我瞄咗阿仁一眼,心諗個劇又唔係用公司名義搞嘅,而家呢度得我係freelance,其他人都冇合約響身,呢憑乜嘢要人簽保密協議,份協議就算簽咗都冇約束性㗎喎。唔通有人同昭煌爆響口,話我哋搞緊個廣播劇,跟住就攞住份協議入稟法庭?460Please respect copyright.PENANA0N1tJjidUS
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事後,阿仁同我講,話佢知份協議冇約束性,但佢型式上都要做,因爲參與製作嘅人當中,就有幾個係受害人,所以佢想用呢種方法俾所有人知佢有做嘢。460Please respect copyright.PENANA3A5jg7YSCS
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即係話,佢純粹係爲咗建立自己響班受害人心目中嘅形象而做呢樣嘢。460Please respect copyright.PENANAXSFua9IkId
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