事發嘅24小時後,整個劇組都因爲翠欣失蹤不斷響WhatsApp群組留言,阿唯、阿嵐、波利甚至平時只係錄音先出現嘅劇組成員都出曬去幫手搵佢。直到阿仁終於開聲同大家講翠欣安全,我哋先稍微鬆一口氣。285Please respect copyright.PENANAJzaNZCFtLK
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我記得翠欣出事之後嗰晚係星期四嚟,我收工之後匆匆忙忙食咗個飯就開始改劇本。原本個劇已經準備入錄音室搞最後一集,稿都已經寫好曬,冇必要再做任何多餘嘅事。但我最終都忍唔住將翠欣俾人貼街招件事寫埋入劇本,順勢修改埋個廣播劇嘅大結局。285Please respect copyright.PENANAVtSpoEEMZW
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新嘅結局違背咗我儘量貼近真實嘅諗法,完全脫離現實。劇情講述昭煌俾阿仁壞佢好事之後尋仇搵上門,最終兩個人響城門河狹路相逢,阿仁激動之下出手毆打昭煌,並且因爲呢件事俾人告上法庭。而呢一切,都係因爲我想借劇中阿仁把口,講出一直冇辦法同昭煌講嘅說話。285Please respect copyright.PENANAdAToJbwZQo
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「唔好以爲法律制裁唔到你就可以爲所欲爲,總有一日有個乜都冇曬嘅人會掙脫法律嘅束綁,令你後悔你嘅所作所爲。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAiOEuKDQS5F
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現實中即使我懷疑翠欣俾人貼街招係同昭煌有關,我亦冇任何證據可以將呢個人繩之於法,我唯一可以做嘅,就係好似喪家犬咁響劇入面借阿仁雙手毆打呢條友,用劇入面最後法庭嘅一幕,講出現實中講唔出口嘅說話。285Please respect copyright.PENANAJVEwQTjccS
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法律係咪公正,我冇資格去講,但我相信每個人心中都有把尺。當一d人可以迴避甚至利用法律去傷害其他人嘅時候,除咗做一隻喪家犬去稍微抒發自己之外,仲可以做d乜嘢?285Please respect copyright.PENANA0KxqCQAcYc
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當我對住份修改好嘅劇本苦笑時候,放響檯上面嘅電話突然響起嚟。285Please respect copyright.PENANAu7IMUlHRqU
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我攞起部電話,雖然對方冇來電顯示,但唔知點解,我嘅直覺已經話咗俾我知係邊個打嚟。285Please respect copyright.PENANAHsL8Qaipbm
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「你終於打嚟啦,翠欣。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAghduPaBb6u
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「………嗯。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAbJhUCfZyOs
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雖然電話入面嘅聲音細到幾乎聽唔到,但我好肯定自己冇聽錯。285Please respect copyright.PENANA7hUUu7UU21
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「今晚好熱呀,成十一點幾都仲卅幾度,頭先響街搞到成汗,返到嚟涼吓冷氣飲杯凍嘢先舒服d咋。係呢,你返到屋企未?」285Please respect copyright.PENANAEqkHCxObjT
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「返....返到啦....」285Please respect copyright.PENANAzd2PyMlGav
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「返到就好啦,夜晚仲咁鬼熱,睇嚟可能會打風。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAOvy3beA1a9
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呢晚,我同翠欣好似返咗去第一次見面咁,全程都係我一個人東拉西扯響度講個不停,而佢就間中俾一兩隻字回應吓咁。不過咁都好,與其好似第二次響醫院見面咁搞到不歡而散,我寧可繼續同佢保持呢種溝通方式。285Please respect copyright.PENANAmE0MCRd1nP
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「諾斯,今晚d街招....」285Please respect copyright.PENANAGnDJo4U2NY
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「得㗎啦,我走嗰陣已經搣得七七八八,之後阿仁搵咗幾個人嚟幫手。聽朝我會過去再幫你睇吓,如果有人再貼嘅話,我會幫你處理㗎啦。」285Please respect copyright.PENANALVg1iE4bGP
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翠欣聽到我咁講靜咗一輪,搞到我以爲佢收咗線,點知....285Please respect copyright.PENANArdhzrBNJLl
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「多謝。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAqylM59yRNz
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有時候,男人出手做一件事,唔係要個女人以身相許或者要佢報答d乜。只要對方唔好奉旨咁嘅態度,一句多謝其實就已經好足夠。285Please respect copyright.PENANAN0yclQDMyo
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「唔洗客氣。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAkSyy6pIKgT
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可惜,而家好多女人諗得太複雜,衷心咁講「多謝」呢兩個字,響呢個城市已經變得極其罕有。285Please respect copyright.PENANAIzw3uW24VQ
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我珍而重之咁將翠欣呢句多謝袋咗落袋,在我嚟講,成件事就正式完結。285Please respect copyright.PENANAXEQKusIjNw
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「係呢,阿仁佢哋好擔心你,如果你有時間....」285Please respect copyright.PENANAIwLsNwOXeR
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「我....我唔會再上高登㗎啦。你幫我同佢哋講聲多謝,唔洗擔心我,我冇事。」285Please respect copyright.PENANA5UmjFTWfTX
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翠欣肯潛水絕對係一件好事,況且連昭煌都已經潛咗水,佢離開呢個地方亦理所當然。只不過大家冇諗過,件事最尾要搞到佢份工、影響埋佢生活先告一段落呢。285Please respect copyright.PENANAeKHBJ92Axi
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「唔上水唔緊要,總之你以後帶眼識人啦。個劇搞掂之後,我會搵機會擺上講故台。如果有一日你擺低咗件事,或者當係人哋嘅故仔咁睇吓,俾個Like我就夠啦。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAi6o3y3IUmG
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「其實,點解你要做呢個劇?」285Please respect copyright.PENANA3L06ZPuNH6
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「點解?」285Please respect copyright.PENANAYUuW5JRfs6
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「我聽阿唯講,你寫劇本、做訪問,仲要負責埋剪接....花咁多時間值得咩?」285Please respect copyright.PENANAKSmW4OOLJQ
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翠欣嘅問題,直到我而家動筆寫呢個故嘅時候,我都依然係冇答案。285Please respect copyright.PENANAIW4WuovuQk
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一開始,我只係諗住幫阿仁手,做件有意義嘅事。後來,我發現阿仁嘅計劃根本唔需要個劇,而我就同自己講爲咗付出咗時間、精神、金錢嘅劇組朋友完成件事。到呢刻,劇組所有人因爲《乜週刊》士氣低落,就連WhatsApp群組入面嘅話題都個劇再無任何關係。我嘅感覺就好似跑緊一場馬拉松,沿途越跑越少人,到衝線嘅一刻,成件事只係得番我自己一個。285Please respect copyright.PENANAHkp8JelEwi
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得番我一個嘅話,咁仲做唔做?285Please respect copyright.PENANAvZ1kDtPLol
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「我...我會聽個劇....我會嚟俾like㗎啦。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAVhGxWRI3RD
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聽到翠欣呢句,我終於好似有番個目標。285Please respect copyright.PENANAuhfDhdNBJL
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「多謝你。」我衷心咁同翠欣講。285Please respect copyright.PENANAbu92vxqRwA
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有時,有d嘢,唔到最後真係唔知究竟邊個救咗邊個。285Please respect copyright.PENANA1kC1dMFovm
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同翠欣道別之後,雖然件事正式告一段落,但響最後一次踏入錄音室嘅時候,我依然不自覺咁將佢嘅一舉一動,講說話嘅小動作投射咗響飾演翠欣嘅阿Ta身上。285Please respect copyright.PENANAAtHXRuSVvm
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「等等,阿Ta,剛才嗰段我哋試多個Take。翠欣嘅反應應該係更加壓抑多少少,就好似成個世界都針對佢,佢逼到走投無路嗌出嚟咁。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAkqLsoRxFXg
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阿Ta雖然係我哋劇組入面年紀最細嗰個,但佢亦係我要求得最嚴格嗰個。呢件事有冇私心?絕對有,因爲我唔單只想聽衆感受到翠欣嘅單純被人利用,更加想將佢嗰份無知帶嚟嘅傷害血淋淋咁重現。285Please respect copyright.PENANAJv15t6a5ir
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「諾斯,你俾阿Ta休息一下先啦,咁Chur法都唔掂㗎。」波利第一次響錄音嘅中途嗌停件事,然後當所有人都離開咗錄音室嘅時候,佢就靜靜咁行埋嚟,「你冇事呀嘛?」285Please respect copyright.PENANAA5GICkMWL8
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「冇嘢,今晚最後一次錄音,有少少壓力啫。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAX9yRrkJ12E
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「係就最好啦。」波利偷偷指一下錄音室外面等咗半晚嘅雪人,按照今晚嘅進度,恐怕佢都係冇機會錄主題曲。285Please respect copyright.PENANANUb3SpZUBo
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我見佢已經黑曬面,唯有硬住頭皮出去同佢講聲對唔住,可惜雪人錄完自己嘅對白之後,最終都係就粒聲唔出就走先。285Please respect copyright.PENANAcyNqh3AMZ6
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後來,聽聞阿仁隔咗一排終於搵咗個地方俾佢錄音,幫手唱歌嗰位朋友甚至有玩開Busking,但以2014年響鴨寮街幾百蚊買番嚟嘅器材,又點可能同正規嘅錄音室相提並論?直到我剪完成套劇,阿仁始終都係唔肯俾我聽佢同雪人錄咗d乜出嚟,只係同我講.....285Please respect copyright.PENANA93PNlhMMvX
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「得啦,就用番原曲,你唔好問咁多啦....」285Please respect copyright.PENANAP8iV4dQTxA
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OK,唔問就唔問囉.....285Please respect copyright.PENANAiPrbui1sJo
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講番最後一晚錄音,其實除咗要照顧雪人同埋阿Ta之外,由於最後兩集嘅內容比較多情緒起伏位,我特意安排幾位演員各自匿埋響唔同嘅角落,甚至阿仁同阿嵐都幫手叫其他人唔好玩得咁過份,儘量俾空間演員投入角色。印象中,大家錄咁多次都未試過今晚咁如臨大敵。大家都好清楚,呢晚就係大家嘅最終測驗,人人都攞住劇本,高度集中。285Please respect copyright.PENANArHzfQT0U1q
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「阿仁上法庭嗰幕,我想試你吓做得浮誇少少。我俾條片你睇,如果你覺得OK嘅,我想陣間試試一Take過直落。」285Please respect copyright.PENANA0rWiHWbYJF
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「Rocky,陣間昭煌引阿仁打佢嗰段,你儘量做得賤格d。諗吓你哋兩個呢四年以嚟嘅恩怨,諗吓你而家俾佢搞到乜都冇曬,想刺激阿仁郁手嚟扭轉局面。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAKImdTqjXrT
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「波利,你幫我叫阿唯準備入錄音室,後面直落嗰段要比較多時間,我想先搞掂佢同米芝蓮嘅劇情,放佢哋走先。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAdwcfnABcep
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「阿仁呀,你可唔可以同雷哥講今晚俾多個鐘頭我哋錄?」285Please respect copyright.PENANAgM0zvDiZl1
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呢晚,翠欣嘅問題一直響我腦海入面不斷重複。點解要做呢個劇?花咁多時間值得咩?呢個問題,我的確係冇答案。而家成件事已經憨鳩到冇朋友,但同時,我就好似上咗身咁對自己、對手上做緊嘅嘢變得更加嚴格。我知我冇權亦冇身份去對其他人指指點點,但我亦知道,若果呢場馬拉松跑到最後得番我自己一個的話,我唔對自己嚴格d、連我都對自己揸流攤的話,咁仲有邊個可以完成件事?285Please respect copyright.PENANAxyDWGcYeyA
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就響呢個時候,錄音室開始傳嚟阿Ta錄開場白嘅聲音。285Please respect copyright.PENANA69zdmBJROW
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「網上有句名言,上網勿認真,認真就輸了....」285Please respect copyright.PENANAeey3VPKaQd
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我深呼吸咗一口氣,準備推門返入錄音室,點知波利突然輕輕拉咗我一下。285Please respect copyright.PENANADtGFMZLQJW
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「諾斯,你睇吓。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAMrO5c7KKIA
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我之前都有講過,我唔介意做最憨鳩、俾人恥笑嗰個,因爲最憨鳩嘅嘢總要有人做。但當我回頭嘅時候,我發現呢晚認真嘅人唔只我一個。285Please respect copyright.PENANASIKTZhzjBH
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哪怕呢刻昭煌已經潛水、《乜週刊》件事搞熄咗大家團火、大家已經再冇任何理由要繼續做呢件事,但係呢一晚響雷哥嘅錄音室入面,每個人都聚精會神咁攞住劇本練習,就連經常坐響控制室篤電話嘅阿仁都盯實錄音室嘅一舉一動。285Please respect copyright.PENANAfd8I5jADwg
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「大家終於都一條心啦。」285Please respect copyright.PENANAUKJX9RmXpM
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「係啊。」285Please respect copyright.PENANA2SpS8uPvrG
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十幾個人一齊輸也好,兩百萬人一齊輸都好,有d嘢一世人只得一次。285Please respect copyright.PENANAryiJcR6fef
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We have nothing to be ashamed of.285Please respect copyright.PENANArz9jPfBNMA
我哋冇嘢需要覺得丟架。285Please respect copyright.PENANAfLWNm91DTe
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