「我好直接,我要油同埋評分,呢d就係大家俾我嘅動力,係我唯一嘅報酬。我唔想益班講故台蝗蟲,佢哋淨係識響人哋個故爛尾之後處理抽水,你哋呢班Hi Hi,我幫你唔到。」689Please respect copyright.PENANA4nQKs96gXE
689Please respect copyright.PENANAqxgFZYPa7R
昭煌呢個人,真係好識捉路。佢將高登仔、連登仔嘅心理摸得一清二楚。佢嘅留言好直接、又寸嘴,次次出聲都必定踩中人哋嘅底線,辣着一班人同對方嗌交。呢個係佢嘅風格,亦係我最初留意到佢嘅原因。同唔妥佢嘅人嗌交就係最基本嘅日常,佢仲會慫恿佢d支持者幫拖反擊,簡直係將「炎上事件」變成娛樂。689Please respect copyright.PENANAonD9acJPaH
689Please respect copyright.PENANAMcg9x1oIdk
「叫人寫多d故就會成功嗰班垃圾,叫佢哋食屎啦!」689Please respect copyright.PENANAgKLDULhQSv
689Please respect copyright.PENANAS89vC68YMU
昭煌唔只一次響網上發表佢對做作者嘅睇法,而事實上,佢真係好識得搞氣氛、討好讀者,例如出文嘅時候貼埋叫雞、爆房嗰陣偷拍嘅相,又或者係繪形繪聲咁逐步教你點樣北上叫雞,呢d招數的確係令到班讀者對佢死心塌地。689Please respect copyright.PENANAnD6oHOgIrm
689Please respect copyright.PENANA8Mlxveu4Hj
你可能會話,香港有淫褻物品條例,昭煌咁玩唔怕俾人拉咩?就算唔拉,方丈都應該出手啦。689Please respect copyright.PENANAl6LMhYBPnA
689Please respect copyright.PENANAjyntkETQ3l
事實上,當年真係有唔少人向方丈投訴過,不過昭煌公開貼出嚟嘅相全部都冇露點,而更進一步嘅相片,就只係留響佢私人群組入面傳閱。對於講求「有圖有真相」嘅高登、連登仔嚟講,化名非飛人嘅昭煌簡直就係大神,就連唔少講故台較爲出名嘅作者,都開始加入佢嘅「私人群組」。嗰陣,好多自命懷才不遇,有或者係標榜自己響講故台寫咗好多年嘅「老手」紛紛都對呢個「破壞規矩」嘅非飛人口誅筆伐,但冇任何把柄在手,所有人都只可以睇住佢一步步上位,雖然一肚火都係無可奈何。689Please respect copyright.PENANAjJSxXSY3nC
689Please respect copyright.PENANANctImsFIQb
而當昭煌知道其他人吹佢唔脹之後,佢嘅留言就變得更加輕佻,「大家唔洗理嗰班冇料到嘅on9仔,繼續賜酒得啦!今晚,我會繼續講同肥妹「bu吱bu吱」之後,我返落香港同阿Jane扑嘢嘅經過,想睇嘅記得正評!」689Please respect copyright.PENANApFpOepDpYA
689Please respect copyright.PENANAy8qSp9MmtC
所謂嘅「bu吱bu吱」,就係《北上一回》入面,主角同某個肥妹做愛嗰陣,抽插時候發出嘅聲音。一般人寫甜故,用詞同劇情來來去去都差不多,偶然玩d獵奇少少,讀者已經覺得滿意收貨。而昭煌嘅做法,就係憑住佢語不驚人誓不休嘅性格,專門寫d令人意想不到嘅形容詞,製造一種令讀者親歷其境嘅感覺。單單係嗰段「bu吱bu吱」嘅描述,就不知令幾多讀者響電腦面前「起立敬禮」。689Please respect copyright.PENANAK53xZ4ZB2A
689Please respect copyright.PENANAUhFUsqsYDa
呢可以話昭煌嘅手段係旁門左道,但條友就係靠住呢d招數,將自己推上講故台嘅人氣巔峯,聲勢直逼之前嘅《莞城森林》同《踎監世界》。所以當女讀者突然響講故台開po話俾非飛人騙財騙色嘅時候,好多人都以爲今次又係條友故意搞出嚟嘅新花樣。689Please respect copyright.PENANAyz1PGpG9LJ
689Please respect copyright.PENANAFmzhp8FjVk
「個女仔真係受害者嚟,我俾咗昭煌張相佢睇,確定咗非飛人就係林昭煌。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAcwQcq7vvZx
689Please respect copyright.PENANAcJ5RYehUED
阿仁同我講呢番說話嘅時候,已經係翠恩響討論區暴走咗幾日嘅事。689Please respect copyright.PENANATloHlqwMqP
689Please respect copyright.PENANA4db2eZsYRE
翠欣,網名芒果綠茶,當年佢響高登討論區情緒失控嘅事,相信好多人都有好深刻印象。嗰陣,大部份人抱住食花生嘅心情去睇佢暴走,故意留言刺激佢、笑佢,目的係爲咗睇吓佢可以有幾癲。有人甚至半認真咁話,想睇佢直播跳樓自殺。689Please respect copyright.PENANAJIw9Mq2NVm
689Please respect copyright.PENANAAgN8YJf9Mw
而發生緊呢d嘢嘅時候,我正好劇本寫到小倩個故事嘅結局。689Please respect copyright.PENANAEeogoXP0jp
689Please respect copyright.PENANABEiGDCMLL1
「我幫你約咗翠欣,你睇睇今日過去醫院搵佢啦。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAqifStXk60S
689Please respect copyright.PENANAEUz9UB4awd
「醫院!?」689Please respect copyright.PENANALfFeO5dRwx
689Please respect copyright.PENANAd2VNe6rO8o
「人哋做護士嘅,係得嗰少少時間同你傾㗎咋。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAbxXGEKk6Cx
689Please respect copyright.PENANAk7JRM54rWC
「俾你嚇死,我仲以爲討論區班人真係逼到佢....」689Please respect copyright.PENANA9U5PNCjrJp
689Please respect copyright.PENANAxU9fBaRXbN
「.....總之你見到人,講嘢小心d啦。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAyuydf1wvV2
689Please respect copyright.PENANAXdyVDFwrSp
「吓!?你咁講咩意思?」689Please respect copyright.PENANAnWEQajnuTR
689Please respect copyright.PENANAYwnQo4ot5d
阿仁條仆街冇俾任何解釋就收咗線,而我,就帶住少少中伏嘅感覺打咗電話俾翠欣,成爲接住落嚟件事入面,少數同翠欣響現實入面接觸過嘅人。689Please respect copyright.PENANA3Pq5a8EAHq
689Please respect copyright.PENANA3736u70Q7S
我記得,約翠欣見面嗰日係下晝一點左右。當時佢啱啱放Lunch,我約咗佢響醫院附近一個小公園見面。689Please respect copyright.PENANA2wf40q2qS2
689Please respect copyright.PENANAi6xrSf3VBc
今次同小倩、阿唯、柳情甚至係中大Mandy做訪問唔同,以往嗰幾次,受害人都係講述番好多年前嘅事,而今次翠欣俾昭煌騙財騙色只係啱啱發生,甚至響我哋見面嗰刻,佢響電話另一邊仲係同緊昭煌糾纏不清緊。689Please respect copyright.PENANAochxu1jEWQ
689Please respect copyright.PENANABxikKHboDd
「仆街仔,你真係當咗我做《東張西望》。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAW6L9WVtSWL
689Please respect copyright.PENANAd9afTOvZdw
「你...話咩話?」689Please respect copyright.PENANATbn2HBb5Kk
689Please respect copyright.PENANAsJ1VJjE8v8
「冇......冇嘢。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAncF4nQcJPQ
689Please respect copyright.PENANAHPb4jQ9Sxt
企響我面前嘅,係一個150cm左右,身材凹凸有致、個樣斯斯文文、帶少少baby fat嘅護士妹妹。望住呢個妹豬,我實在好難想像佢會響討論區周圍發癲咬人、俾網民恥笑咗SP、做雞嘅黐線婆。如果俾討論區班友知道翠欣嘅真身,恐怕一個二個立即改口,排隊申請做佢SP就真!689Please respect copyright.PENANAwwMACKnMzW
689Please respect copyright.PENANAwnQTGfYMI2
雖然成功約咗翠欣出嚟,但除咗剛才所講嘅幾隻字之外,佢全程就係坐響度粒聲唔出。就算我俾套劇佢聽,又或者係問佢有關昭煌嘅事,翠欣都只係一直面無表情咁望住遠處,完全唔知佢諗緊乜。689Please respect copyright.PENANAkFFazemqWy
689Please respect copyright.PENANALIikKsq19a
我自問唔係一個有耐性嘅人,如果佢好坦白咁同我講佢冇興趣接受訪問,我當然唔會強人所難。反正已經寫完小倩嘅故事,就算響呢度停筆,我都叫做對件事有曬交代。689Please respect copyright.PENANAdBAikb5wtr
689Please respect copyright.PENANAo4EmxrB4gC
但,唔知點解,響我見到翠欣之後,我就產生咗一種唔可以就咁走咗去嘅感覺。雖然翠欣冇講過一句說話,但我察覺到佢一直留意緊我,即使係佢冇俾任何反應,但佢對耳、佢嘅注意力,其實一直都冇離開過我身上。689Please respect copyright.PENANAeTipt08Qpw
689Please respect copyright.PENANAVzMgDV1Xr7
我突然諗起波利曾經講過嘅一句說話。689Please respect copyright.PENANAheaglRMIhF
689Please respect copyright.PENANAK95wJaUk9I
「一個女仔,無論係張牙舞爪,又或者係封閉自己嘅內心,其實都係爲咗保護自己,唔想再受到傷害啫。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAh1ACQ7qeEn
689Please respect copyright.PENANA4F031IKiDV
當日,波利講呢番說話,係因爲阿嵐突然響麥當勞黑我面、鬧我。689Please respect copyright.PENANAP67zajyW4o
689Please respect copyright.PENANAMn9cmHRfKd
而今日,響我面前嘅翠欣,何嘗唔係做緊同樣嘅事?689Please respect copyright.PENANADdGWNcoKGz
689Please respect copyright.PENANAVjUc4l7YCX
由於同小倩、阿唯、柳情佢哋做訪問太過順利,我忘記咗,我只係一個三唔識七嘅局外人,仲要響度不斷問佢哋最唔想重提、最血淋淋嘅回憶。689Please respect copyright.PENANAkZDVmxeXUV
689Please respect copyright.PENANAnQPr6rPyo3
「我,都試過俾中意嘅人出賣、試過戴綠帽,知道俾最愛嘅人出賣嘅滋味。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAaxhe5mUHBd
689Please respect copyright.PENANAilzipS8TIT
接住落嚟嘅一個鐘頭,我冇再問過翠欣任何問題,反而將發生過響我身上嘅事,向佢講曬出嚟。期間,翠欣冇講過任何嘢,只係靜靜咁聽我講。雖然佢對眼始終冇落過響我身上,但我知道佢好用心咁聽曬我所有嘅說話。689Please respect copyright.PENANARemaR8YNwv
689Please respect copyright.PENANAgw5oRhGZnz
然後,翠欣嘅電話突然響起上嚟,醫院嘅Lunch Time完啦,結果佢同我都冇食過任何嘢,只係響公園坐咗一個鐘。689Please respect copyright.PENANAwLZ41JgavL
689Please respect copyright.PENANAEFWy2Jnl0R
「唔好意思,我夠鐘返去做嘢啦。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAbL8whShUGv
689Please respect copyright.PENANAY6QG1Gg749
「明白。今日阻咗你咁耐,唔好意思。」689Please respect copyright.PENANA5RSDv8F4mK
689Please respect copyright.PENANAGlRJ3K0PII
翠欣聽到我咁講,起身拍一拍身上嘅護士制服,準備離開,但臨走前,佢突然轉過頭,細細聲咁留低咗一句,「下次見,諾斯。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAam5NV8nGHj
689Please respect copyright.PENANAxKhcAuyLeM
老實講,響聽到翠欣嘅說話之前,我一直有種柒到想搵窿捐嘅感覺。向一個俾人騙財騙色嘅女仔講自己綠帽嘅經歷,究竟係想人哋同情自己,抑或係想博對方認同?689Please respect copyright.PENANAgmsINB66AB
689Please respect copyright.PENANAWLqcW76IR1
翠欣走咗之後,我一個人繼續響公園坐咗好耐。689Please respect copyright.PENANAHtujiqqzkJ
689Please respect copyright.PENANAbqJKlK6Vwv
呢個女仔同我之前接觸嘅受害者好唔同,佢整個人散發出嚟嘅氣氛,有種表面好平淡,但你feel到佢精神繃緊到就快要斷嘅感覺。我懷疑自己係受咗佢影響,所以將一直收響心入面最失敗嘅事講咗出嚟。689Please respect copyright.PENANAD2LWaNsWmz
689Please respect copyright.PENANAwWSlV5SZ8N
而就響我思考緊呢件事嘅時候,波利突然打電話俾我。689Please respect copyright.PENANAndOlPtaYFF
689Please respect copyright.PENANAbB47FohaVA
「諾斯,阿仁話想你試試潛入昭煌個私人群組。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAL4UdND1vfE
689Please respect copyright.PENANA1xjZXa79az
「吓?我收錢寫廣播劇咋,唔包做臥底㗎喎!」689Please respect copyright.PENANAAu7taUI9rC
689Please respect copyright.PENANAFWlFpL3Ckp
「阿仁話,個劇講完小倩單嘢之後,就直入最近非飛人件事喎。」689Please respect copyright.PENANAPYvcvaym55
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【真人真事改編】那一年,我幫人寫咗個網絡廣播劇(微甜)
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