同小倩講完電話之後,我坐咗響電腦面前,隨手打咗一堆字。249Please respect copyright.PENANAmmXzYBtnAw
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嚴格嚟講,嗰堆嘢連大綱都稱不上,只不過係訪問小倩之後嘅一d諗法,因爲我真係唔知應該點樣落筆。249Please respect copyright.PENANACpu9V7z8U7
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我望住阿仁俾我張名單,上面最少五、六個女仔嘅聯絡方法。佢哋全部都係俾昭煌騙財騙色嘅受害人,有d俾人呃幾千,有d呃咗幾萬,最高金額嗰個係俾昭煌呃成幾十萬!249Please respect copyright.PENANA7ocjZAFS0W
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雖然小倩話昭煌口才好得,但我認爲昭煌絕對唔只一度板斧。249Please respect copyright.PENANA9hLEGfuAxu
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可惜我冇辦法直接聯絡昭煌,向佢當面請教一下。249Please respect copyright.PENANAzyTBMJt6PI
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阿仁張名單上面每個女仔都有自己嘅故事,但個廣播劇冇可能逐個受害人咁寫。所以最直接嘅寫法,就係用昭煌嘅角度,講述佢點樣將一個個女仔呃上床。而我亦好肯定廣播劇嘅聽衆一定會中意呢個角度,尤其如果加入大量受害人嘅性愛場面,鉅細無遺咁描寫點樣埋身肉搏,仲要教埋大家點樣呃蝦條…… 我知道只要咁寫,個劇一定會出位,如果有老細要投資呢件單嘢,相信呢個應該係最有可能成功嘅方向。249Please respect copyright.PENANA568oWSsZOE
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只不過,我從一開始就唔係爲咗錢答應阿仁幫手寫呢個劇。249Please respect copyright.PENANANJprGTl9B7
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阿仁同我講,佢已經搵曬班底製作呢個廣播劇。由演員、主題曲、錄音室,到後期製作同埋宣傳出街佢都搞掂曬,當中更加係有受害人答應親自參與,大家一齊出錢出力。佢哋嘅目標唔係將昭煌捧成英雄人物,所以就算要加甜,我都要顧及受害人嘅感受。249Please respect copyright.PENANAPgsi6jxjcq
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我一直不斷提醒自己毋忘初心,希望守住個宗旨嚟寫劇本,可惜我越在意,寫出嚟嘅嘢就越無聊。249Please respect copyright.PENANAkQGDVvNqsF
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第一集嘅初稿響訪問小倩之後嘅第五日完成咗。我嗰晚攞劇本俾阿仁睇,佢睇完唔太滿意,同我講:「諾斯,我搵得你幫手,你想點寫就放手去寫啦,唔洗乜都跟足曬發生過嘅事窩。」249Please respect copyright.PENANAKDzoNVFP7v
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我以爲佢呢句係因爲我寫咗佢俾小倩拒絕嘅事而唔高興,點知佢下一句就話:「你認爲d偉人嘅傳記係咪100%忠於發生過嘅事?」249Please respect copyright.PENANAGQL7DxQrGh
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聽到阿仁咁講我又好似明明哋佢想要d乜,不過始終我都係擔心按佢意思咁寫會令個廣播劇冇曬公信力。249Please respect copyright.PENANAgOnNNuQZRR
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「總之,我只係想將昭煌做過嘅衰嘢公諸於世,至於細節嘅過程,你點寫我都冇所謂。」249Please respect copyright.PENANAn98a1s2cUT
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其實阿仁搵我寫廣播劇嘅時候,佢同幾個受害人已經響討論區爆緊昭煌d衰嘢出嚟。所以我真係唔明點解佢仲要咁執着做個廣播劇。249Please respect copyright.PENANA8DVpJ4Q8vm
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「爆料、見報都只係一時三刻嘅事。昭煌呢個人已經唔只一次潛水換名又繼續呃人。我要嘅係留低一d嘢,就算四年後、八年後,只要有人睇番,都會知道整件事嘅來龍去脈。」249Please respect copyright.PENANAoMjYEMaC75
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小倩被騙財騙色嘅事發生響2010年,而新嘅受害者係響2014年上討論區哭訴嘅。換言之,響呢四年間,昭煌一直響度更換身份物色落手嘅對象,所以阿仁同廣播劇嘅製作組今次係要令昭煌冇機會再翻身。249Please respect copyright.PENANAUJap1t8sR5
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我按照阿仁嘅講法,將部份「設定」稍微作出改動。我筆下嘅阿仁係一名毒L,但現實中嘅阿仁講過,毒L嘅佢早就已經死咗。2014年嘅阿仁比我筆下嘅複雜好多。佢好多鬼主意,個腦成日都響度諗住各式各樣嘅計劃,但永遠唔會講曬全盤計劃俾任何人知。而我,就響對阿仁一知半解嘅情況下,繼續寫「毒L阿仁」嘅故事。249Please respect copyright.PENANAYIM9JcCmlp
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然後隔咗一個禮拜左右,阿仁突然打嚟,話想借個地方俾廣播劇製作組出嚟見面。249Please respect copyright.PENANAnNJIyAAAwl
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反正寫咗個劇都要交俾製作組,加上我都好想同參與製作嘅人見面,所以就問咗公司Partner,以公司名義同人借咗間Meeting Room俾大家開會。249Please respect copyright.PENANAHRDDagC93d
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記得製作小組第一次開會嗰日係星期六嚟,我一早響Meeting Room準備好頭幾集廣播劇嘅初稿,但阿仁就叫我唔好攞出嚟住,佢有d嘢要做咗先。249Please respect copyright.PENANAB5BFgsCHgw
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「各位,我哋今日搞得呢個劇就係坐埋同一條船。大家都知道昭煌呢排又響討論區寫故呃蝦條,今次仲有其他人響後面包庇佢。所以爲咗將我哋跟住落嚟要做嘅嘢保密,我呢度有份保密協議,請各位簽咗佢,等大家都可以安心d。」249Please respect copyright.PENANA5KZSrwAB1v
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其實到咗而家呢刻,我都唔係好明,我哋又唔係用公司名義搞呢件事,簽保密協議又有咩用?唔通有人向昭煌爆響口,話我哋搞緊套廣播劇,阿仁就真係攞住張保密協議去告對方咩……249Please respect copyright.PENANA1d1OsI4wjm
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雖然張嘢只係一張廢紙,但當時有三個人乜都冇講,馬上簽咗份嘢俾阿仁。249Please respect copyright.PENANA7df2kqIdzo
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第一個,係廣播劇入面都出過場,夾響阿民同阿駒中間嘅阿唯。249Please respect copyright.PENANAbubDKM2IcO
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第二個,係頭髮長長,身材唔錯,戴眼鏡嘅女護士阿嵐。249Please respect copyright.PENANA3IkHWs8kHk
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而第三個,係身形嬌小,但一入嚟Meeting Room就已經爽手安排好曬所有嘢嘅祕書子,波利。249Please respect copyright.PENANA8TByAJrTej
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阿唯爽手簽保密協議我並唔意外,因爲根據阿仁所講,阿唯對小倩俾人呃嘅事一直都耿耿於懷,加上佢同昭煌亦有私怨,所以阿唯響劇本嘅取材上面確實係幫咗我好多。249Please respect copyright.PENANAlRNXhND3Bd
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至於阿嵐,佢就係阿仁所講參與咗製作嘅受害者之一。不過阿仁私下同我講,叫我唔好問阿嵐同昭煌發生過咩事,人哋肯幫手錄音就算啦。所以我只係知道昭煌呢個人對護士有情意結,專門向護士落手,但阿嵐同昭煌之間嘅事,我一句都冇問過。249Please respect copyright.PENANAQ6HtXhJavo
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最後嘅祕書子波利,呢個人雖然冇響廣播劇入面出現過,不過佢可以話係整個劇嘅靈魂人物。甚至有時我會懷疑,如果唔係波利響度幫手嘅話,好可能阿仁呢個劇根本就搞唔成!
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【真人真事改編】那一年,我幫人寫咗個網絡廣播劇(微甜)
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