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1.雪融與暖冬8964 copyright protection149PENANAQxa3FXLjy7 維尼
從年少時的那句「雪融之後,還是愛你。」,到離別信「2023雪融之後,我們就結婚。」,最後採用暖冬來呈現。8964 copyright protection149PENANAnTiqOTuZTV 維尼
暖冬,沒有下雪,更沒有雪融。8964 copyright protection149PENANAsY6PBvRyeO 維尼
象徵著回不來的林尋,和不再能實現的承諾。8964 copyright protection149PENANA2CEktCKyeT 維尼
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2.余冉冉8964 copyright protection149PENANA6VJkJoBH8T 維尼
這個女孩的安排其實我覺得還不錯,身為一個局外人,林尋和程淮的一切她都看在眼裡。8964 copyright protection149PENANAuIc3r3odGb 維尼
除了林尋的遺憾、程淮的思念與悲痛,添上了冉冉的惋惜與悲憐,為整部作品的情緒色彩堆疊更加豐富。8964 copyright protection149PENANAv2ocakWj2O 維尼
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用字和編排都有精心安排過,用字組成不複雜,卻帶有唯美之感,是我很喜歡的風格,讓人看得很舒服。8964 copyright protection149PENANAxpUvTpRIbm 維尼
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