雜談一下應該大家都有遇過的,一段話的敘述中重複了太多個相同的字彙,於是想要抽換字彙,偏偏又想不到什麼好的替代詞彙,結果文章就會卡住很久。158Please respect copyright.PENANAMz3dAQtKIp
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我也是有時候遇到這種情況很困擾,不過後來我發現了通常會愈到辭彙重複的問題,不一定是作者本人辭彙量的問題,其實是因為句子的結構的太過相似。158Please respect copyright.PENANAKQaUW9rECE
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字彙在句子中都會有一定的詞性,也就是說很多時候並不是知道的字彙不夠多造成抽換詞面時卡頓,而是上下兩句話的結構太相似,造成能卡進那個位置的詞彙變少。158Please respect copyright.PENANAI1bepTrll7
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所以如果發現自己的字彙經常重複,且抽換詞面的時候會卡頓很久,也許就可以想想,是不是相連的段落敘述的方式太相似了,可以試著換一句話說。158Please respect copyright.PENANAWVr5qbWCbG
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比如說:158Please respect copyright.PENANAVmVux2lu8s
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天氣十分炎熱,將他熱得滿頭大汗。158Please respect copyright.PENANA8mgVj93Ny7
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>這句話,能發現熱這個字彙短時間重複了兩次。如果要單單用抽換詞面的方式去把其中一個熱抽調,會發現能塞進這個空格裡的字並不多。158Please respect copyright.PENANAzizIA1pFjj
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但是我們也許可以把同樣的意思換句話說。158Please respect copyright.PENANAooJgqoVgQI
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比如這樣:158Please respect copyright.PENANASZWoFMbc8k
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天氣十分炎熱,像是要將他體內的水分都蒸乾一樣。158Please respect copyright.PENANAKB4sJa5Avm
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藉由改變形容的方式跟句子的結構,就可以避掉字彙重複的問題。158Please respect copyright.PENANACQe3I7ohQe
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大家可以試試看喔!
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廢稿與歲月正相關(寫作心得)
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Jun 25, 2022
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詞面抽換時卡頓?試試看這樣
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