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躍然紙上的生存之道 𓍝
ISSUE #47
Author: 路波（Loop）
Published:
Aug 31, 2022
躍然紙上的生存之道 𓍝
Author: 路波（Loop）
Published:
Aug 31, 2022
ISSUE #47
【寫作省思】總算有空稍微整修文字建築
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今天，我比較有空，會把《用愛發電》某些章回的畫面、文字修飾補一下。

我一直都是把這件事放在最後有空做，先直覺寫稿，寫故事內核和基底。甚至，最忙的時候是用說的不是演的暫時帶過（該屎，重打五十大板）。

不過，我猜我的直白書寫可能會勸退不少喜愛文字的人吧。

雖說補強，但本身算用詞貧乏的人ＸＤ 很難寫出啥超級優美畫面，層次感強的鏡頭。

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但我還蠻好奇的，沒有修飾文字會勸退多少人？

還是說，只要閱讀順暢，即使少一點畫面鏡頭，還是能啃下去呢？

704Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEBHyyulnR7

忙碌是個原因，再來就是因緣際會下不小心開太多坑，但我又不想棄坑，所以每個坑的品質難以掌握。

好想知道閱讀習慣喔，比較好衡量投資時間成本。

（難怪我會跑去學編劇，用字往後放多適合我）

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哇～我寫日記垃圾話速度的技能果然點最高。

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