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《A20特工前傳》讀後感寫作
ENTRY #2
Author: 天洛卡
Published:
Mar 11, 2019
《A20特工前傳》讀後感寫作
Published:
Mar 11, 2019
ENTRY #2
讀後感（第一集）
Author: 天洛卡
Published:
Mar 11, 2019
1 Min Read
79 Words
No Plagiarism!zlYf7NDYohK7IG7iBySgposted on PＥNAＮＡ

優點：

*背景資料描述簡潔、清晰，讀者輕易知道人物關係和行動目的

*情節推進不拖拉

略嫌不足：

*動態場面描寫可更仔細，如人物表情、語調等等，以增加臨場實感

其他小建議：

*段落可更細分，方便閱讀347Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkcxkllDpRD

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