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讀寫象外 寫作教學專欄
Author:
子遴
ISSUE #1
孩子缺乏想象力,怎辦?(一)
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一、成人把它鎖上了;1809Please respect copyright.PENANAOsYdwU9f7j
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二、孩子自己鎖上了;1809Please respect copyright.PENANAfca5AHETVt
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三、盒子被掩埋了,大家都發現不了。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAWNYRZwL3NZ
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第一個原因的元兇當然是成人,在紐伯瑞、盧梭、蒙特梭利等學者之前,兒童世界是沒有「娛樂」一詞,而娛樂就是想象力的溫床,沒有這溫床,哪來的想象力呢?就算到了廿一世紀,許多兒童仍缺乏娛樂的空間,或者只是被規範的、受到嚴格管制的,甚至只是徒具形式的娛樂,骨子裡就是要學懂一門技能。現在的兒童大都文武雙全,體藝俱佳的菁英份子,只是他們有多少會認為在這些音樂、藝術、體育訓練中,能尋找到一鱗半爪的「娛樂」?一旦跳出規範,就會容易在考核和比賽中有所差池,更遑論要在其中表現自己的情感或加進創造性元素。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAPwT7zP1T00
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退一萬步說,孩子內心的想象力盒子被關上,就連真心想說的話也未敢寫出來。我曾請一位在母親眼中是缺乏想象力的小三學生寫一篇描寫他媽媽的短文,他告訴我:1809Please respect copyright.PENANAHbGfi1KcMF
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「我的媽媽像個打火機,一撻即著(國語的意思是「一摁即著」)。」1809Please respect copyright.PENANA1hJkZbMfFS
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我稱讚道:「形容得很好啊,寫下來吧。」他搖搖頭說:「不。」我回頭看看他那坐在不遠處的母親,就明白他搖頭的意思了。後來他寫下了對父親的形容,我就感到這孩子並非如母親所說的缺乏想象力,只是他的盒子被某種無形的壓力關上了。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAC9UQlJdIzV
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這種無形的壓力,誇張點說,有點像文人面對文字獄,或者像朱自清在《槳聲燈影裡的秦淮河》一文中,描述自己面對賣唱的歌妓時所受著到的道德律的壓迫一般。難道真能夠如胡適所言「我手寫我心」?我在這裡無意冒犯家長,把他們形容得像暴君一樣,但想象力猶如一匹不羈的野馬,不能因為怕牠桀驁不馴而索性將之困在柵欄內便了事。假若各位知道伯樂與千里馬的故事,就會明白這一點了。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAqNKMFoWPDY
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有伯樂之稱的孫陽為了替楚王尋找千里馬,四出遊歷,結果看到千里馬正在被一個車伕奴役得瘦骨嶙峋,於是買下牠,並帶回給楚王,向楚王解釋千里馬本可馳騁沙場,而落在不懂飼養的車伕手上,只會成為一匹普普通通的馬匹。後來經過伯樂的悉心栽培,終於脫胎換骨。1809Please respect copyright.PENANA0MODOaUiY9
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孩子就如一匹千里馬,要悉心栽培,在諄諄善誘下打開他們想象力的盒子,任他在草場上自由奔騰,盡情發揮獨特的潛能。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAc5qy6RMlU8
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以下是我其中兩位學生所寫的短文〈如果我有一支神奇畫筆〉,看看他那想像力的盒子內有甚麼魔法吧:1809Please respect copyright.PENANA5OGVV4m7bp
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如果我有一支神奇畫筆,我會用它來替我變出新的東西。首先,我會在紙上畫出一些圖案,然後在筆裡取出「閃閃粉」,把它撒在圖案上。不一會兒,這個圖案就會變得立體,而且懂得說話、玩耍,還會吃東西。1809Please respect copyright.PENANA2fPbZwPQBB
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我又會用神奇畫筆畫一些金錢來照顧家人,並且畫些食物和衣服,那麼,我就可以穿上我喜愛的衣服和吃美味的食物,使我心滿意足。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAWqBgr14j29
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神奇畫筆最神奇的地方,就是可以幫助我做功課和溫習。一旦遇上不明白的地方,就請它替我解答。它的記憶力也十分強,會用「記憶體」來記住老師的話,當我溫習時,就播放老師的話,讓我能重溫課堂的內容,你說多好啊﹗1809Please respect copyright.PENANAwALQSMDWhw
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我真想擁有一支神奇畫筆。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAjraErhUwXw
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如果我有一支神奇畫筆,我會畫出我最喜歡的食物。接著,就會畫出一些蟑螂和黑色的老鼠。然後,我就會開始幻想以下的情境:那些蟑螂和老鼠吃了那些食物後,就會立刻開始不停地嘔吐。那些食物就會原封不動地被吐出來。最後,許多人知道這件事時,就會稱我為「畫中滅蟲大師了」﹗1809Please respect copyright.PENANA2XGmyPFU1p
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想象力是沒有絕對的規則和形式,從孩子的創作中,應該可看見他們內心那個「真實的自己」。以下就是我的盒子裡那支「神奇畫筆」:1809Please respect copyright.PENANAl70ioPoGHR
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如果我有一支神奇畫筆,我會用它畫出一個神奇膠擦,擦去不喜歡的東西,例如:學校考卷,那就不用考試了;惡夢,那就可讓我一覺睡到天亮;不好吃的食物,那就只剩下我喜歡吃的東西了;大雨,那麼我就可以常常到戶外玩耍……還有一樣,就是媽媽的眼淚,那樣她就可以變得快樂了。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAq5F4u9yLCQ
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同一支神奇畫筆,放到不同的作者手裡,應該會出現截然不同的魔法,因為魔法不在畫筆,而在作者心裡。一篇寫作,是寫出作者的個性和態度,而不應該成為滿足別人標準的模型。1809Please respect copyright.PENANAHxGMQpmbQr
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可是,孩子也會自動鎖上那個想象力的盒子的,何解?(待續)ns 172.69.58.23da2
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