感謝各位的投稿!221Please respect copyright.PENANAAVT8rKxi7Q
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!221Please respect copyright.PENANA8QuDz9mDfu
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~221Please respect copyright.PENANAZdPj8XRsaD
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法221Please respect copyright.PENANAOd2XOybKXu
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!221Please respect copyright.PENANAkdnaMKV3aY
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!221Please respect copyright.PENANAhgIer4X6Gs
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》221Please respect copyright.PENANAmZFLMIADoa
(兼人氣獎得主)221Please respect copyright.PENANAZkmxIEcIAL
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD221Please respect copyright.PENANAXnjX4bFawT
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W221Please respect copyright.PENANAfEPCUZ3xVu
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!221Please respect copyright.PENANANiw8lHM74E
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」221Please respect copyright.PENANAUoyANzAhbi
結果後續結尾意外二連發!221Please respect copyright.PENANACrRDJ1pcXg
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意221Please respect copyright.PENANAF4luFgxKtW
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺221Please respect copyright.PENANAwUCUPRoLxF
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事221Please respect copyright.PENANAlmeoWiiYqE
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》221Please respect copyright.PENANAuQD9C6ktOz
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD221Please respect copyright.PENANAOHkzRQM0G6
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯221Please respect copyright.PENANAygZFhYJ30U
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣221Please respect copyright.PENANAhwCpfqbAO4
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD221Please respect copyright.PENANAO3inSpXqx6
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~221Please respect copyright.PENANAGjGF5tgCxa
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?221Please respect copyright.PENANASVKy13TAF3
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文221Please respect copyright.PENANAYZ91bZDQOw
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:221Please respect copyright.PENANAjt7lNmTUdu
這個名次是最難抉擇的221Please respect copyright.PENANAlMw6keA3Ur
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態221Please respect copyright.PENANAL7OHJlCVfe
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧221Please respect copyright.PENANAIpnObsuRiv
以發佈順序點評:221Please respect copyright.PENANAvufUWgAHf6
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》221Please respect copyright.PENANA1eDdmj7Bfy
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底221Please respect copyright.PENANAgONLo1X3Cx
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END221Please respect copyright.PENANAzOtAbIOEjh
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺221Please respect copyright.PENANAcHOvWjomhI
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案221Please respect copyright.PENANAsxfmShkCkx
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w221Please respect copyright.PENANAMZFS5V2ufE
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖221Please respect copyright.PENANANCnx3DZDM3
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到221Please respect copyright.PENANAED2jkC7i3B
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》221Please respect copyright.PENANACb8Qn7K3k7
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!221Please respect copyright.PENANAZJC1dAtMQZ
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點221Please respect copyright.PENANApvWEQIK7yP
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD221Please respect copyright.PENANA1MnDcEtx0m
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)221Please respect copyright.PENANAUuJbUizNjE
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒221Please respect copyright.PENANABmJJP6Tx5I
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚221Please respect copyright.PENANABuzsQUutOF
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失221Please respect copyright.PENANAuXHsBkkXu3
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了221Please respect copyright.PENANAkrMGaI885M
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性221Please respect copyright.PENANAQqb9yhg3R0
例如:221Please respect copyright.PENANAYbbrj1C5Cl
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢221Please respect copyright.PENANAj9Y2BUng7V
>放學忘記去放乖乖221Please respect copyright.PENANA9goO4tA78A
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂221Please respect copyright.PENANA7srTFGFgVP
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些221Please respect copyright.PENANAPqBS05gJtJ
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性221Please respect copyright.PENANAZxOFDV171t
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》221Please respect copyright.PENANAZiGq9vZ7DO
宛如聊齋的古風故事221Please respect copyright.PENANAmzWrARN5P3
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?221Please respect copyright.PENANAnmebveCZ7y
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋221Please respect copyright.PENANA4046tyRLbE
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)221Please respect copyright.PENANAnlGDtl6xYy
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?221Please respect copyright.PENANAsEkRSWkKSN
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度221Please respect copyright.PENANAwf9zrLCKwx
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD221Please respect copyright.PENANAhSUWxkvwG9
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌221Please respect copyright.PENANAyHw8fRjtM5
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了221Please respect copyright.PENANA3UjPeY82wT
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞221Please respect copyright.PENANAMPvQugrroW
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間221Please respect copyright.PENANASGpTWRUsPi
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠221Please respect copyright.PENANAb59vXMdhRB
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖221Please respect copyright.PENANAwB0TMj29Yb
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒221Please respect copyright.PENANAdRBPdVGrtM
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說221Please respect copyright.PENANA8v7ohaj9u3
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》221Please respect copyright.PENANAOJfwvzIcir
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞221Please respect copyright.PENANAnUujvIOWwI
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!