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超武鬥組 第一章:畜牲集團
Author:
周輝
超武鬥組 第一章:畜牲集團
Author:
周輝
ISSUE #80
第一章 更新
No Plagiarism!SijwHx14awMxwUSIURzrposted on PENANA 終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:8964 copyright protection430PENANANoUshnujmQ 維尼
角色改名434Please respect copyright.PENANAuTXwpt6zlY
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:8964 copyright protection430PENANAzep85mvKgo 維尼
何大力->南昌一絕434Please respect copyright.PENANAHMXmrT0bYS
劉元山->海柏434Please respect copyright.PENANAxkZOaGEp7A
陳生->曉尚434Please respect copyright.PENANAdKb0TSpFhs
李生->曉珀434Please respect copyright.PENANAcFuyYtvTgN
嚴生->迎豐434Please respect copyright.PENANAIbASrzYqyt
史生->富薈434Please respect copyright.PENANAM8MCFRcYDh
林生->傲形434Please respect copyright.PENANAWpXYmP0ZK1
黃生->利奧434Please respect copyright.PENANAC7uADo6YKT
張生->曉岸8964 copyright protection430PENANA6QqN7JsXIc 維尼
執文法434Please respect copyright.PENANAgJXSkafnBt
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。434Please respect copyright.PENANAs7jaikK5c8
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