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未來之夏野評
ISSUE #3
《還他無盡夏-餘餘餘》野評
No Plagiarism!pi21yqPmmt12NLixkRVYposted on PENANA https://www.penana.com/user/74946/%E9%A4%98%E9%A4%98%E9%A4%98348Please respect copyright.PENANAVaD2XubHQv
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未來之夏是八仙過海嗎?又是一頭怪物!348Please respect copyright.PENANAJYTKR1kdHs
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沒想到作者這麼大膽倒敘又插敘,我覺得敘事頗複雜,重看了一遍還是沒全部看懂(說聲抱歉),要看百篇八千字的評審通常不會看得太細啦!但是作者的文筆實著不錯。348Please respect copyright.PENANA3xXjyEHDyc
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內文不知道為甚麼有零星的簡體字,改稿的時候可以改一下。348Please respect copyright.PENANAIAICMpqtZR
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鍾鑫的心境、自殺的理由可以多講一些。錯的不是誰,果然都是八千子的錯。8964 copyright protection344PENANAlO091LzRgL 維尼
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