Creature Name: Moudird (m-ow-d-er-d)793Please respect copyright.PENANAWG7xxy0FMT
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Creature Race: Demon/Beast793Please respect copyright.PENANA7DYuxrT9V6
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Location: Mountains & Deserts793Please respect copyright.PENANAPfEMqPohsQ
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Region: Unknown793Please respect copyright.PENANAjOcYu48Dt5
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Realm: Aphelia793Please respect copyright.PENANAwqTt9wNUTh
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Body Size: Compared to a large bear on average, some can be a foot to few feet larger793Please respect copyright.PENANAM8kbHtc2GI
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Feet: Walks on 2 feet, sharp bird talons with thick scaly skin793Please respect copyright.PENANAZOPPlD5DVf
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Body Type: Covered in feathers it has two large wings which fold close to its body. These wings hide two sacks where it can store live prey.793Please respect copyright.PENANA5DnIxbasvV
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Body Description: At a distance appears to be a large hunched over bird or hunched over creature. It has long tail feathers that some, who are able to and daring enough, have used for roof coverage. The feathers hold small crystal like stone along their surface to give the beast protection in the wild. It's head can retract back inside of its body like a turtle. The head is fleshy and soft with very short feathers around the neck. The beak is sharp and strong, curved and compared to that of a vulture.793Please respect copyright.PENANAET5vmTvnof
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Eating Habits: Being a carnivore it eats meat. It's main preferred food source is humans or humanoid creatures.793Please respect copyright.PENANAqaTudMotrY
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Magic: No or none that is used outside its body. It can at times release a toxic gas from its mouth if it feels threatened with no other options to survive. The gas can melt the flesh off a human in under 1 minute, a demon in under 4 minutes depending on the type of demon and other factors. If the exposed threat can escape out of the toxic gas then they have a chance at survival if treated quickly and properly to stop the flesh melting/body shutting down from the toxin.793Please respect copyright.PENANAKJGx9r4XQc
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When the beast releases a toxic breath then it must wait 1 to 2 weeks before its body can reproduce said gas for use again.793Please respect copyright.PENANAXR2j4SZFSb
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Unique Facts: It has a covered fleshy hole around its back around the area above its neck. When it eats a human or humanoid being then the following takes place listed below.793Please respect copyright.PENANA80jMos0nGr
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> The creature is swallowed alive793Please respect copyright.PENANAsiwwLbZNUx
> In the throat the creature is met with stinging acid like vapors793Please respect copyright.PENANAN2jBYN2Uzy
> The muscles push the creature into a second stomach like sack793Please respect copyright.PENANAZzenTjR2Mi
> In this sack the creature is assaulted by vine like internal appendages793Please respect copyright.PENANAKtnMYyVUZg
> The appendages squeeze, crush, and invade the creature793Please respect copyright.PENANAERJHvBbFX3
> When invaded the appendages open and release skinnier appendages793Please respect copyright.PENANADTzSJa4eD2
> The new appendages spread throughout the body of the creature, this is very painful if the creature is still alive793Please respect copyright.PENANAtrBl3eToTK
> The new appendages wrap around, enter, and pulse to take control of the creature's body and bodily functions793Please respect copyright.PENANAtFCKeCJS9q
> The creature is moved by the invading appendages out of the sack793Please respect copyright.PENANAOYhy3E6ElH
> The creature is forced up through the fleshy hole so its upper body resides outside the beast793Please respect copyright.PENANAHkJXlDkyNl
> This appearance can be compared to how a Centaur looks793Please respect copyright.PENANAnUSnFpHFDi
> If the creature is still alive they are unable to speak and suffer a slow death at the beast's mercy793Please respect copyright.PENANAntFV4zlq0d
> The invading appendages release nutrients into the creature to keep its body alive/from decomposing once it has died793Please respect copyright.PENANAG0kHBYUJvv
> When the beast senses the creature is becoming past its expiration date it will find another and repeat this process793Please respect copyright.PENANAZuIwqbvghp
> Once a new creature is consumed and the process begins again, the old creature is pushed out by the fleshy muscles of the hole after the appendages all retract793Please respect copyright.PENANAak9ChdnLj7
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Reason: The beast does this to more easily lure in unsuspecting prey by hiding its body and allowing only the creature to be seen by passersby. When the passersby nears to see what the creature wants or what/who the creature is then the beast can strike with its head shooting out to capture the new prey for a tasty meal.793Please respect copyright.PENANATiUxeB6LKC
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Reason Behind Hidden Wing Sacks: Allows the beast to have 2 backup creatures to replace the current creature in times of scares prey. Below is how the process happens after swallowing.793Please respect copyright.PENANAsHpvOKfROj
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> The creature/creatures are swallowed alive793Please respect copyright.PENANABVkmDFo8HB
> In the throat they are taken down and met with the same stinging acid like vapors793Please respect copyright.PENANATFcymCHJeQ
> The throat muscles push and the creature/creatures are shoved into the stomach793Please respect copyright.PENANAkaREjo35Pi
> The stomach compresses793Please respect copyright.PENANAifTvH9RZDV
> This compression pushes the body through a tight hole into a tight, dry fleshy sack793Please respect copyright.PENANA9Pvts8NGnl
> Inside the tight sacks the body churns and fills with a rotten smelling gas793Please respect copyright.PENANAKmXJEixpGk
> The creature/creatures choke then fall asleep/pass out793Please respect copyright.PENANAPLWiVF8uLh
> The sack compresses as it fills with a numbing fluid793Please respect copyright.PENANAzoTtTFXF2s
> This fluid numbs the body but allows the creature/creatures to breathe as they are fed nutrients through this liquid793Please respect copyright.PENANABbbyCAwmQY
> The fluid drains away 2 days before it will need to replace its current creature puppet793Please respect copyright.PENANA7IgrRm4cYE
> This allows the body to fill the sack with a sour gas to bring the creature for use around793Please respect copyright.PENANArdGpJ5T88b
> When the creature can feel and starts to stir they are squished and pushed into the second stomach793Please respect copyright.PENANAihizc0dffF
> Once in the second stomach the awake/waking creature experiences the above process793Please respect copyright.PENANAfmoLyWgtwi
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Fact About Sacks: 793Please respect copyright.PENANAJamuFzeUVf
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> When the beast raises its wings then a being will be able to see if a body is curled up inside it even when there is fluid filling it793Please respect copyright.PENANAaeiNUOs8MK
> When filled the sack does not bulge out to make its wings stand out but they are lifted a little bit, about 2 to 4 inches away from its body when in resting793Please respect copyright.PENANAAh3RjwY46b
> The sacks can be sliced opened by a sharp enough blade, traditionally one made from the fangs and scales of dragons. 793Please respect copyright.PENANA5RYKQ4Kv26
>> Other blades that work are ones crafted from or coated in a diamond/similar substance. 793Please respect copyright.PENANAD5POF9HVws
>> Methods of magic use has mixed results. The right spell can work but the wrong can cause more harm than good to the trapped creature. 793Please respect copyright.PENANAeWptiVWiWs
>> The sacks can be opened after the beast is slayed but it must be done quickly within 1 to 2 minutes or less. This is due to once the beast dies the internal magic in the fluid that allows the creature trapped to breathe, loses that trait and begins to drown the creature in a foul water like gooey substance. 793Please respect copyright.PENANAZq5cxMpQgc
>> The creature can recover over a 2 to 4 week time with the proper medicine and care, depending on the length of exposure to the numbing liquid.793Please respect copyright.PENANAnexnqke02r
> The sack is view-able outside the body793Please respect copyright.PENANASC2hHju8iR
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Life Expectancy: 200 to 400 years793Please respect copyright.PENANASlCrbY7QUU
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Breeding: Mates 2 to 5 times a year793Please respect copyright.PENANAWrjMZTnptm
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Reproduction: Lays up to 3 moderate to large sized eggs in a nest793Please respect copyright.PENANAgkJefzPmr4
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Babies: The young once hatched eat on regurgitated bile from the mother and/or father created from their most recently devoured and digested meal793Please respect copyright.PENANAgRR2LvZOVs
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Other Facts:793Please respect copyright.PENANAw0o3m13nOF
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> Males are very territorial and will kill other beasts of any kind if it feels the being is there to take its turf from it793Please respect copyright.PENANAy3nBJ2fug2
> Females are very violent when they have young in their nest towards any not the father793Please respect copyright.PENANA291JRgQE1Q
> They are dayturnal beasts793Please respect copyright.PENANAmWbqJanRhh
> They have poor vision in the dark/hazy weather793Please respect copyright.PENANA6LbPv20Nw9
> Their meat is a delicacy in some countries/regions793Please respect copyright.PENANAm6wJhYBIOe
> Some describe their cry to that of a crow and raven warped together793Please respect copyright.PENANADmxVkATuHM
> Keeps its head pulled into its body when sleeping for protection due to its hardened feathers793Please respect copyright.PENANAs4ZyASSAvK
> Not often seen flying but they can fly793Please respect copyright.PENANA6ECdfzdcp3
> Cannot speak English/human but are smart enough to survive and be considered a dangerous threat to those unaware of them793Please respect copyright.PENANAGKW7ufNQ4n
> None have tried taming these beasts and had success793Please respect copyright.PENANALeEJ8gaBfp
>> Exception to this is the rare 4 times a person with demon/beast qualities with/without magic managed to tame 1 to use like a mount for travel and combat793Please respect copyright.PENANAfQWpI9T91z
> When one dies any near it will eat what they want of its flesh and abandon the rest by flying and dropping it away from the mountain or desert area they call home793Please respect copyright.PENANARivkVJTd68
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MAKE A MONSTER
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ENTRY #3
A Demon Profile
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