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書評活動？！作者你不是每次書評都被噴爆！給我先確定欸～
ENTRY #23
Author: wrighta6m5c
Published:
Dec 25, 2025
書評活動？！作者你不是每次書評都被噴爆！給我先確定欸～
Published:
Dec 25, 2025
ENTRY #23
【求書評】《水神轉生》
Author: wrighta6m5c
Published:
Dec 25, 2025
1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!qHxmdmuqL2cERdLfj9hyposted on PＥNAＮＡ

感謝舉辦書評～～

《水神轉生～～創造異世界的水神，轉生再轉生後在凡間冒險》：https://www.penana.com/story/190250/水神轉生-創造異世界的水神-轉生再轉生後在凡間冒險

1.我希望大大能評價的方向是第二話如何改進，最近有在想如何重修前幾章，但第二話⋯⋯真的好難改啊啊啊，轉生永遠是超尬的開始！

2.簡介：

「是男生的話就要叫做⋯⋯阿爾弗雷德·馮·萊特！」

伴隨著一個雄厚男聲的宣告，我，一個平凡無奇的私校高中生，在遭遇暗殺後轉生到劍與魔法的異世界了

不不不，開什麼玩笑啊？不可能吧？！

但事實就是如此

而且還在往更加荒唐的方向前進⋯⋯

劍術X魔法X政治X貴族生活，以及最重要的工業糖精！

充滿歡樂的異世界生活，現在開始！

3.一句話吐槽：

每章寫的文風都不太一樣，序章和之後的章節不像同一個人寫的wwwwwww

216.73.217.9

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