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請留下你/妳的書評
ENTRY #2
Author: 休
Published:
Aug 8, 2020
請留下你/妳的書評
Published:
Aug 8, 2020
ENTRY #2
是個缺點也是優點。
Author: 休
Published:
Aug 8, 2020
1 Min Read
166 Words
No Plagiarism!FSy19mFrIxPLbcfQMuyhposted on PＥNAＮＡ

因為時間有限，我謹針對某些部分去評論，文筆流暢，簡潔有力，沒有花過多的多餘字數去描寫場景或人物的舉手投足，讓讀者能省去一些時間去直接閱讀到重點。

標點符號過少，假如是散文或是新詩還可以省略標點符號，但小說字數比較長，這樣很容易造成閱讀者不適，一句話的本意也很容易被曲解，排版太像散文，可能你是認為這樣閱讀方便，當然，這樣排版也可能成為你的個人特色，是個缺點也是優點。

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