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來創作你的改篇歌吧
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Author: 葉嘉勞
Published:
Jul 24, 2018
來創作你的改篇歌吧
Published:
Jul 24, 2018
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Author: 葉嘉勞
Published:
Jul 24, 2018
1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!209Hvy5UuejeP0SaWiiDposted on PＥNAＮＡ

你有沒有一首你很想改篇的歌呢！我就有了，就是周杰倫的等你下課。這分明是跟蹤狂之歌嘛！好，讓我來糾正錯誤！！

https://youtu.be/kfXdP7nZIiE3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMf8C1HXmYP

跟蹤狂之歌

你住的巷子裡 我租了一間公寓

爲了想與你不期而遇

高中三年 我爲什麽 爲什麽不好好讀書

沒考上跟你一樣的大學

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtU7xcI29LS

我找了份工作 離你宿舍很近

當我已經買了望遠鏡 才發現你不開窗簾

喔 你又擦簾而過

你屋子有什麽 能不能告訴我

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvUYSlrsuUN

(合)

躺在床上隔著鏡子看著你

屋子裡的燈 還亮著你沒走

記得我寫給你的情書

在90年代了 你當著我臉撕了

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRJHJZCujlo

總有一天 總有一年 會發現

有人默默偷窺著你的俏臉

也許我不該在你的世界

當你撕了情書 也代表我已經走遠

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnIT5fKO7ze

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkdaFz25A00

學校旁的廣場 我在這等鐘聲響

等你下課一起走好嗎

(合)

拿手帕 擦上哥羅芳 昏迷一點都不痛苦

痛苦的是你根本沒看我

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1vIS4PUZVd

我愛得這麽用心 卻走不進你心裡

在人來人往找尋著你 只想要你求個結局

呵 你又擦肩而過

你走進小胡同 我終於可下手

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡttbxqtMJdJ

拿著迷藥從後悄悄地靠近

小巷裡的燈 昏暗你沒發現

記得我寫給你的情書

雖然你都撕了 答案我還在等著

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡALdgWrIrtO

終於等到 終於等到 這時間

我可以親手摟著你的腰間

終於我踏進了你的世界

當你閉上了眼 代表意識已經走遠

有沒有勾起你的興趣呢，快來參加～～

3341Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTPIBGVGRTh

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