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是時候發表咱的詞作了....

文筆粗糙請見諒030;

內容包含多種詞牌，憶江南、一剪梅、踏莎行、如夢令等著名詞牌。

小的最喜歡填憶江南了//句式整齊，首句精練、收尾得宜，還有....是很短的小令owo``

咱擅長寫景與描寫植株，少為抒情。

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蘇芳 sponsored 66coins!
詞的章法有好幾種，上景下情、上因下果、上昔下今、上問下答等等。創作手法也有很多，用典、擬人、虛實結合等等。

我在大大的詞裡不太看得出有寄託之意，而且描寫的部分太多，感情的部分太少，偶爾有顯得也太過直白。詞一般是婉轉的，就算是蘇軾一流的豪放派詞人，指的是創作主題的風格豪放，多以家事國事為主，而不是單統直抒胸臆，流於表面。

所以我覺得大大可以嘗試在詞裡面加入這些技巧。因為我自己是中國文學系，平時也有詩詞曲方面的創作，所以忍不住留下一點意見，希望沒有顯得唐突。
6 years ago ⋅ 3 repliesReply
零兒
你說的沒錯，我對於感情描寫的部分非常不擅長，感謝您的意見。-。+
如果確定要寫，我會嘗試的。-。！
6 years ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
零兒
喔對了，我是化學系的（？）ww
6 years ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
蘇芳
@零兒,哇喔，我是化學白痴，中學時化學考試老是不及格www
6 years ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
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