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交響J評文專欄【一】
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1.接受投稿類型：現代言情、古風言情、恐怖、懸疑、黑暗、寫實 、靈異、科幻 

2.不看奇幻與武俠、GL、BL

3.萬字以上長篇小說看到我不想看為止。可以指定章節進行評文，最多看到三萬字。

4.會給予簡單的心得、優點與缺點的分析、以及個人一點點的小改善建議

5.一天看一篇，請給我時間慢慢一篇一篇的看，切勿催促

【最終解釋權歸作者所有，條文可能會不定時補充】

評文人介紹：

​​​​​​​筆名：交響J

目前是妮娜愛手作藝術工作室負責人

早年喜歡寫人性黑暗面或靈異的故事，已完結的作品有【灰】、【絕】、【許願菸】、【黑色交響曲】以及短篇故事三十八篇

現在步入中年，喜歡寫甜甜蜜蜜的愛情故事， 已完結作品有【寤寐求之】【靜夜生香】

【寤寐求之】已出版實體書與電子書

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子不語 sponsored 500coins for Issue 39!
感謝建議！
其實本傳就是用這種方式，破題直接把任務都交代清楚了。 XD
11 months ago ⋅ 5 repliesReply
交響J
那番外為什麼會變成這樣捏？ XD
11 months ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
子不語
@交響J, 因為傳統的奇幻的確是這樣漸漸開場 XD
我正傳的方法是偏網文的破題開場～～

大概像這樣：

https://m.penana.com/story/151766/%E6%9C%88%E8%90%BD%E8%8A%B1%E9%96%8B-%E7%AC%AC%E4%B8%80%E9%96%93%E5%A5%8F%E6%9B%B2-%E7%83%88%E7%81%AB%E4%B9%8B%E5%BF%83/issue/1
11 months ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
交響J
@子不語,你首章的格式沒有番外寫的好。太多對話框沒有標人名，看不出誰在講話，動作跟語氣其實也要加上去。還有不要標紅字，那對讀者不會產生特殊影響。
11 months ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
交響J
@子不語,劇情倒是還ok
11 months ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
子不語
@交響J,感謝！之後的修文會朝這個方向前進！
11 months ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
餃餃餃ᴳᴺᴺ sponsored 100coins for Issue 10!
謝謝大佬的評論~~
邏輯的部分真的很多人提醒過我了哈哈哈 之後修稿會想辦法改的
非常感謝^^
11 months ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
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