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我寫的爛爛的，問我為什麼覺得自己寫得爛還是寫，問就是懶，新詩可以寫的很破碎，非常的適合懶人。

以下是我的範例（諸君可以放心寫，有我墊底💪）

近到吐息可以吹起頭髮，


近到像是隨時可以依偎的有力懷抱，


近到毛細孔中散發的涼氣淹沒你的鼻子和耳朵，


就這樣，輕輕地托起你身體的每一寸，


　　既守禮卻又放肆。


舊時代的頭紗，扎眼而模糊，


濺在腳上的雨點，像是某種訓斥，


即便閉上眼也能聽到那鑼鼓喧天的浩大聲勢。

　　

　　我想，你是想要守禮的。

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