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【求評】奇幻文學小說《西斯利亞》想求評第一卷的劇情展開以及世界觀吸引度
音研生
#1
各位大大書友安安!我是音研生
想和各位求西斯利亞的書評
https://www.penana.com/story/84515/%E5%A5%87%E5%B9%BB%E9%95%B7%E7%AF%87-%E8%A5%BF%E6%96%AF%E5%88%A9%E4%BA%9E/
主要想知道在第一卷內(25章內)的劇情展開以及世界觀架構在大家的眼裡夠不夠成熟,主角的角色設定初始會不會太令觀眾反感,有沒有甚麼肉眼可見的bug,以及任何大家覺得不足之處,希望能夠持續精進並邁入下一章卷!
由於內文並非輕小說的格式寫法,在前五章會稍微步調慢一些,是為了鋪成後續事件以及人物間關係所致,也希望有在閱讀文學小說的書評大大們,能夠多多提出不足的建議(文筆架構甚麼都好)
在此要麻煩各位了!先在此感謝任何一位願意替我寫下書評的大大們!
2 years ago
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筆言
#2
我覺得是挺好看,可能減少了些日系元素,比較有新鮮感。
但我還未有看完,所以就發個短評在這裡。
2 years ago
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音研生
@筆言, 天啊 感謝你
讓我知道還有人在看這篇文章
謝謝你對它的喜歡
如果有不足的地方再麻煩指出了!
2 years ago
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愛鯊客
#3
書評已完成,寫了整整三天呀喵!
2 years ago
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音研生
喔天啊 我馬上去看!
不好意思麻煩您這麼多天!
非常感謝您!
2 years ago
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愛鯊客
@音研生, 十幾萬字要看完還是要花些時間:D
2 years ago
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想和各位求西斯利亞的書評
https://www.penana.com/story/84515/%E5%A5%87%E5%B9%BB%E9%95%B7%E7%AF%87-%E8%A5%BF%E6%96%AF%E5%88%A9%E4%BA%9E/
主要想知道在第一卷內(25章內)的劇情展開以及世界觀架構在大家的眼裡夠不夠成熟,主角的角色設定初始會不會太令觀眾反感,有沒有甚麼肉眼可見的bug,以及任何大家覺得不足之處,希望能夠持續精進並邁入下一章卷!
由於內文並非輕小說的格式寫法,在前五章會稍微步調慢一些,是為了鋪成後續事件以及人物間關係所致,也希望有在閱讀文學小說的書評大大們,能夠多多提出不足的建議(文筆架構甚麼都好)
在此要麻煩各位了!先在此感謝任何一位願意替我寫下書評的大大們!
但我還未有看完,所以就發個短評在這裡。
讓我知道還有人在看這篇文章
謝謝你對它的喜歡
如果有不足的地方再麻煩指出了!
不好意思麻煩您這麼多天!
非常感謝您!