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宣傳並想獲得《扭曲的愛情》的評價
fifguy
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是因緣巧合下被朋友推薦來這裡創作的,這是我第一篇作品,而且還在讀書,所以文筆會很爛,麻煩多多包涵。
因為沒寫過小說,所以現在還在摸索的階段,而且也很缺乏一些評價用作改進,對於很多的寫作技巧例如氣氛營造之類的一竅不通,也不懂的如何能寫的更好一些,還請各位大佬和寫手多多指點。
在這裡希望能得到多方面的評價,無論是好還是壞,我都會虛心接受,感覺寫得很爛的話,也不用介意,儘管噴吧。
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皓聿
#2
不知道為什麼……點進去是墮落的天空
不知道是不是作者改掉了整個故事。
em……文筆方面,我覺得還可以。場景描寫還不錯,還挺有畫面感。
因為只有一,兩章,故事線不夠明顯,不知道作者的意圖,現階段也不好評論。等養肥再說。
2 years ago
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是因緣巧合下被朋友推薦來這裡創作的,這是我第一篇作品,而且還在讀書,所以文筆會很爛,麻煩多多包涵。
因為沒寫過小說,所以現在還在摸索的階段,而且也很缺乏一些評價用作改進,對於很多的寫作技巧例如氣氛營造之類的一竅不通,也不懂的如何能寫的更好一些,還請各位大佬和寫手多多指點。
在這裡希望能得到多方面的評價,無論是好還是壞,我都會虛心接受,感覺寫得很爛的話,也不用介意,儘管噴吧。
不知道是不是作者改掉了整個故事。
em……文筆方面,我覺得還可以。場景描寫還不錯,還挺有畫面感。
因為只有一,兩章,故事線不夠明顯,不知道作者的意圖,現階段也不好評論。等養肥再說。