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不懂如何轉場
煞星人
#1
在寫小說時候想提另外一個地方在發生的事 卻不懂怎麼表達 希望朋友們給些意見
7 years ago
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
@煞星人, 是指主角想提發生在另一邊的事情,還是在另一邊的視角想說發生什麼事?@@
((抱歉我理解力差qwq
7 years ago
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寒凌疾月
@煞星人, 如果是我的話……我會加個—>另一邊。例如:另一邊,X和X正在咖啡廳裡聊天。(後面加個對話之類的)
這是我的情況啦,要看個人。不知道對你有沒有幫助?(笑。
7 years ago
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3-3-Y
@煞星人, 我的話會分下一段然後以說話內容代入,不然會先描述場景然後再慢慢代入重點,這是我寫小說時轉場的方式,希望有幫助到你
7 years ago
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幾時茗月
#2
不太懂你的意思
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
#3
不如試試用例子說明?寫出你發生問題的地方。
7 years ago
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泡沫櫻(疏影)
#4
這裡影子路過。
個人覺得,如果樓主有在看文的話,可以自己多多觀察別人怎麼寫的。
尤其是自己喜歡的文,自己讀著開心,順道就學學人家怎麼寫,可以寫的那麼讓你喜歡。
恩,這裡不是要你抄襲別人,應該能懂齁。😂
7 years ago
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笑望天
#5
我自己的經驗是,當你要轉場時,原先在進行的故事必須做一個有力的收尾,才不會讓讀者無法理解是什麼時候開始轉場的。
簡單的說,就是A與B的得先到一個段落,才接到C與D,有了明確的分段,轉場就不會太過突兀了。
7 years ago
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((抱歉我理解力差qwq
這是我的情況啦,要看個人。不知道對你有沒有幫助?(笑。
個人覺得,如果樓主有在看文的話,可以自己多多觀察別人怎麼寫的。
尤其是自己喜歡的文,自己讀著開心,順道就學學人家怎麼寫,可以寫的那麼讓你喜歡。
恩,這裡不是要你抄襲別人,應該能懂齁。😂
簡單的說,就是A與B的得先到一個段落,才接到C與D,有了明確的分段,轉場就不會太過突兀了。