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【求評】《Kanata自治領 - 公主殿下在英屬北美的奇妙冒險》 - 書評區 | Penana
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【求評】《Kanata自治領 - 公主殿下在英屬北美的奇妙冒險》
Caulesys
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https://www.penana.com/article/1177226
這是一部架空歷史,包含了一點政治内容,主角為美少女們的冒險作品...雖然有人看,不過好像沒什麽人給我提意見的樣子...所以我不知道在文筆或者劇情安排上該做出怎麽樣的改進,只是按著自己的想法去寫...歡迎各位給出評價!!!
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這是一部架空歷史,包含了一點政治内容,主角為美少女們的冒險作品...雖然有人看,不過好像沒什麽人給我提意見的樣子...所以我不知道在文筆或者劇情安排上該做出怎麽樣的改進,只是按著自己的想法去寫...歡迎各位給出評價!!!