My story, Night of Flames has gotten a lot of attention recently, which I love, but at the same time, nobody has answered my call for feedback there. If there are any beta readers who could point out inconsistencies or provied example paragraphs they think could be fine tuned, I would love to chat with them.
Night of Flames is a Sci-Fi novel with roots in Greek Mythology. I hope to officially publish this story one day, but it needs to go through a lot of editing. I'm not even sure where to focus my energy at this moment. I think the story could use some fresh eyes.
@Mariny, I actually read that a couple weeks ago! It was probably one of my favorites in the contest. It really resonated with me, though it's hard for me to place exactly. I guess just the fear of failure and how people will see me if I get too close and show my true colors.
@Lenore Corvinae,Thank you for reading it. .. I talked about the fear of losing someone we are attached to ....This fear makes you either not like to meet new people...and makes you afraid that those you love will leave you if you act naturally...that is, that they will hate your personality and actions...so you act as others want and not as you want ...it's like worrying and thinking too much and constantly about your relationships
I've got a completed story posted on this site. It's entitled Finding Darkness. It's a sci fi story so if anyone is interested, I could use some feedback.
@Azmaveth72, I've read the description and I'm definitely intrigued. I'd be glad to read for feedback if you'll read my Night of Flames book. It has a similar concept I think. Aliens gave the main characters powers and hope to control them to do their biding.
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Night of Flames is a Sci-Fi novel with roots in Greek Mythology. I hope to officially publish this story one day, but it needs to go through a lot of editing. I'm not even sure where to focus my energy at this moment. I think the story could use some fresh eyes.
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𝐻𝑒𝑦 𝑔𝑢𝑦𝑠 𝐼 𝑝𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑖𝑐𝑖𝑝𝑎𝑡𝑒𝑑 𝑖𝑛 𝐶𝑜𝑛𝑡𝑎𝑠𝑡𝑠
𝑇ℎ𝑖𝑠 𝑖𝑠 𝑚𝑦 𝑓𝑖𝑟𝑠𝑡 𝑒𝑥𝑝𝑒𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑛𝑐𝑒. 𝐼 ℎ𝑜𝑝𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑡𝑎𝑘𝑒 𝑎 𝑙𝑜𝑜𝑘 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑔𝑖𝑣𝑒 𝑚𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢𝑟 𝑜𝑝𝑖𝑛𝑖𝑜𝑛 𝐼𝑛 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑐𝑜𝑚𝑚𝑒𝑛𝑡𝑠
𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑖𝑟 𝑛𝑎𝑚𝑒𝑠:
•𝑝ℎ𝑜𝑏𝑖𝑎
•𝐴 𝑛𝑜𝑡𝑒/𝑙𝑒𝑡𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑡𝑜 𝑠𝑜𝑚𝑒𝑜𝑛𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑏𝑢𝑡 𝑑𝑜𝑛'𝑡 ℎ𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑐𝑜𝑢𝑟𝑎𝑔𝑒 𝑡𝑜 𝑡𝑒𝑙𝑙 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑚
𝑌𝑜𝑢 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑 𝑖𝑡 𝑖𝑛 𝑚𝑦 𝑎𝑐𝑐𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑡