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Lenore Corvinae
#1
My story, Night of Flames has gotten a lot of attention recently, which I love, but at the same time, nobody has answered my call for feedback there. If there are any beta readers who could point out inconsistencies or provied example paragraphs they think could be fine tuned, I would love to chat with them.

Night of Flames is a Sci-Fi novel with roots in Greek Mythology. I hope to officially publish this story one day, but it needs to go through a lot of editing. I'm not even sure where to focus my energy at this moment. I think the story could use some fresh eyes.

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11 months agoReply
Mariny
#12
𝐻𝑖 🀍🌷
𝐻𝑒𝑦 𝑔𝑒𝑦𝑠 𝐼 π‘π‘Žπ‘Ÿπ‘‘π‘–π‘π‘–π‘π‘Žπ‘‘π‘’π‘‘ 𝑖𝑛 πΆπ‘œπ‘›π‘‘π‘Žπ‘ π‘‘π‘ 
π‘‡β„Žπ‘–π‘  𝑖𝑠 π‘šπ‘¦ π‘“π‘–π‘Ÿπ‘ π‘‘ 𝑒π‘₯π‘π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘–π‘’π‘›π‘π‘’. 𝐼 β„Žπ‘œπ‘π‘’ π‘¦π‘œπ‘’ π‘‘π‘Žπ‘˜π‘’ π‘Ž π‘™π‘œπ‘œπ‘˜ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ 𝑔𝑖𝑣𝑒 π‘šπ‘’ π‘¦π‘œπ‘’π‘Ÿ π‘œπ‘π‘–π‘›π‘–π‘œπ‘› 𝐼𝑛 π‘‘β„Žπ‘’ π‘π‘œπ‘šπ‘šπ‘’π‘›π‘‘π‘ 
π‘‡β„Žπ‘’π‘–π‘Ÿ π‘›π‘Žπ‘šπ‘’π‘ :

β€’π‘β„Žπ‘œπ‘π‘–π‘Ž

‒𝐴 π‘›π‘œπ‘‘π‘’/π‘™π‘’π‘‘π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿ π‘‘π‘œ π‘ π‘œπ‘šπ‘’π‘œπ‘›π‘’ π‘¦π‘œπ‘’ π‘™π‘œπ‘£π‘’ 𝑏𝑒𝑑 π‘‘π‘œπ‘›'𝑑 β„Žπ‘Žπ‘£π‘’ π‘‘β„Žπ‘’ π‘π‘œπ‘’π‘Ÿπ‘Žπ‘”π‘’ π‘‘π‘œ 𝑑𝑒𝑙𝑙 π‘‘β„Žπ‘’π‘š

π‘Œπ‘œπ‘’ 𝑀𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑 𝑖𝑑 𝑖𝑛 π‘šπ‘¦ π‘Žπ‘π‘π‘œπ‘’π‘›π‘‘
10 months agoReply
Lenore Corvinae
@Mariny, I actually read that a couple weeks ago! It was probably one of my favorites in the contest. It really resonated with me, though it's hard for me to place exactly. I guess just the fear of failure and how people will see me if I get too close and show my true colors.
10 months agoReply
Lenore Corvinae
@Mariny, I thought I should specify. It was the phobia one. I considered joining the contest, but decided against it in the end.
10 months agoReply
Mariny
@Lenore Corvinae,Thank you for reading it. .. I talked about the fear of losing someone we are attached to ....This fear makes you either not like to meet new people...and makes you afraid that those you love will leave you if you act naturally...that is, that they will hate your personality and actions...so you act as others want and not as you want ...it's like worrying and thinking too much and constantly about your relationships
10 months agoReply
Azmaveth72
#13
I've got a completed story posted on this site. It's entitled Finding Darkness. It's a sci fi story so if anyone is interested, I could use some feedback.
10 months agoReply
Lenore Corvinae
@Azmaveth72, I've read the description and I'm definitely intrigued. I'd be glad to read for feedback if you'll read my Night of Flames book. It has a similar concept I think. Aliens gave the main characters powers and hope to control them to do their biding.
10 months agoReply
Jeff marc
#14
I'm currently working on two stories at a time, well this is also my first time writing, my first two stories, have been having a lot of views lately, but I can't really tell if they liked it or not, or maybe I'm kinda doing something wrong.
It hardly gets any comments, I don't know if I should drop the whole story at once πŸ”‚ or keep dropping them slowly πŸ¦₯
10 months agoReply
cyber ink<3
@Jeff marc , hi, I get that feeling a lot. here in penana people rarely like others post or stories. my tips is just to keep going and write like no one will read it,, i think people will love if the entire story is there so they don't have to wait
10 months agoReply
Jeff marc
@cyber ink<3, thanks πŸ™
10 months agoReply
cyber ink<3
@Jeff marc , no prob i hope u have fun writing in penana
10 months agoReply
Azama2000
@cyber ink<3, coincido con el. Pasa similar en wattpad, namas te leen y hasta allΓ­. Pero creo que es mas que nada por flojera. Te recomiendo que valores segun el ritmo de vistas para evaluar que tanto engancha tu obra
9 months agoReply
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