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新手宣傳新作
月夜
#1
大家好~我是新手夜。
希望大家有空能點進來看我的首作!『非妳不可』是愛情小說,不是專業文筆可能比不上各位,畢竟新手嘛~但還是希望能被各位看到!歡迎關注、互相欣賞文章~⊙ω⊙
7 years ago
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朱諾(Juno)
#2
嗨嗨!我是朱諾,一點都不專業的作者
剛剛看了你的小說,還不錯呦!
不過,我有個小小的建議,視角感覺稍微混亂了點,人稱可能得再注意一下了
以上,是本人的拙見,聽聽就好了
Btw歡迎來交流~
7 years ago
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月夜
@朱諾(Juno), 謝謝你的指教,我會試著改進的,我也有這種感覺,實在太感謝你了!⊙ω⊙
7 years ago
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書月
@夜, 你每個群都複製貼上嗎哈哈哈~
7 years ago
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書月
@朱諾(Juno), 安,我是書書>v<
7 years ago
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朱諾(Juno)
@夜, 哈哈 不會啦!
常常練習就會進步,寫作加油喔~
7 years ago
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朱諾(Juno)
@書月, 嗨嗨!很高興認識你😆
等等去你家看看~
7 years ago
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月夜
@書月, 手會痠,腦會累呀~哈哈
7 years ago
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月夜
@朱諾(Juno), 你上次說的問題,我有在試著改進了!希望有好一些……非常感謝你的指點~>ω<
7 years ago
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書月
@夜,( 笑)你該多動腦!等你的第三章
7 years ago
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書月
@朱諾(Juno), 歡迎光臨,我家就是你家(誤)
7 years ago
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月夜
@書月, 快了快了!要出爐了~>ω<
7 years ago
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書月
@夜, 剛出爐熱熱的最好(偏了!)
7 years ago
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希望大家有空能點進來看我的首作!『非妳不可』是愛情小說,不是專業文筆可能比不上各位,畢竟新手嘛~但還是希望能被各位看到!歡迎關注、互相欣賞文章~⊙ω⊙
剛剛看了你的小說,還不錯呦!
不過,我有個小小的建議,視角感覺稍微混亂了點,人稱可能得再注意一下了
以上,是本人的拙見,聽聽就好了
Btw歡迎來交流~
常常練習就會進步,寫作加油喔~
等等去你家看看~