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請告訴我我的缺點,謝謝!
季痕
#1
我是新手,不知道自己寫的是否很好,可否請各位大大幫忙我看看?如果可以,可以給我一點指教嗎?謝謝!
7 years ago
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稽誕
#2
https://www.penana.com/story/15094/%E5%AF%AB%E4%BD%9C%E7%94%A8%E5%8F%83%E8%80%83%E8%B3%87%E6%96%99/issue/1
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7 years ago
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季痕
@稽誕, 非常感謝你喔^^
7 years ago
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稽誕
@季痕, 神祇入世的故事是不錯,但是可以考慮一個一個加,人設部份深度也不太夠,可以考慮設計一些矛盾的組合,比方說暗黑神想當聖騎士,火神想當海盜,風神很宅
7 years ago
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稽誕
@稽誕, 一個個慢慢放,透過日常,才能將角色特性表達出來
7 years ago
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稽誕
@稽誕, 最後,一個必要的衝突點,橫貫全篇的深沈主題,是作品的靈魂,比方說,神也無能為力的事
7 years ago
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