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新手報到 <3
葉瓔
#1
第一次寫小說
我是台灣人
請各位大大給我建議
*哪裡讓人實在看不下去
*內文為什麼讓人想離開
*哪裡用法錯誤
*說故事方法令人厭惡
等...
不怕毒舌
只怕自己作品讓人看不下去
書名:修仙之萬萼谷
介紹:*女子修仙派有不為人知的男徒
*創派著是位女尊者
*隱世於人間的天空之城
https://www.penana.com/story/14646/%E4%BF%AE%E4%BB%99%E4%B9%8B%E8%90%AC%E8%90%BC%E8%B0%B7/toc
7 years ago
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葉瓔
#2
目前第七章
自己比較有感的章節
因為平常上班較忙
寫文速度慢,再請大大們給建議
7 years ago
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我是台灣人
請各位大大給我建議
*哪裡讓人實在看不下去
*內文為什麼讓人想離開
*哪裡用法錯誤
*說故事方法令人厭惡
等...
不怕毒舌
只怕自己作品讓人看不下去
書名:修仙之萬萼谷
介紹:*女子修仙派有不為人知的男徒
*創派著是位女尊者
*隱世於人間的天空之城
https://www.penana.com/story/14646/%E4%BF%AE%E4%BB%99%E4%B9%8B%E8%90%AC%E8%90%BC%E8%B0%B7/toc
自己比較有感的章節
因為平常上班較忙
寫文速度慢,再請大大們給建議